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[Schuyler]

Songs are just poems with lyrics, aren't they?

I assume you mean poems with music. c: Absolutely! That's part of why I especially love really old Folk music; all the focus is on the poetry of the lyrics rather than how loud the dance beat is.

[Kaerie]

Songs are just poems with lyrics, aren't they?

I assume you mean poems with music. c: Absolutely! That's part of why I especially love really old Folk music; all the focus is on the poetry of the lyrics rather than how loud the dance beat is.

Blonde moment, thanks for correcting me xD Yes, music! A poem without lyrics...lol.

[watermelon.]

Spring

The clouds roll away,
we celebrate mother's day,
the grass gets greener,
the air gets cleaner.
The flowers start to grow,
no more snow.
Winter is gone,
get up and mow your lawn
-watermelonyum11

I know, it's cheesy but I'm not much of a poem writer

[ailurophile.]

Wow.... That is rhyming! I never can write a poem that rhymes.

I want to share this poem to everyone, but this is not mine!!!

Mowing

There was never a sound beside the woods but one,
And that was my lang scythe whispering to the ground.
What was it it whispered? I knew not well myself.
Perhaps it was something about the heat of the sun
Something, perhaps about the lack of the sound.
And that was why it whispered and did not speak.
It was no dream of the gift of idle hours,
Or easy gold at the hand of fat and elf.
Anything more than the truth would have seemed to much.
To the earnest love that laid the swale in rows
Not without feeble-pointed spikes of flowers,(pale orchises) and scared a bright green snake.
The fact is the sweetest dream that labour knows,
My scythe whispered and did not speak.
-Robert Frost

[NopesaurusRexx]

Spring

The clouds roll away,
we celebrate mother's day,
the grass gets greener,
the air gets cleaner.
The flowers start to grow,
no more snow.
Winter is gone,
get up and mow your lawn
-watermelonyum11

I know, it's cheesy but I'm not much of a poem writer

Ha ha I love this! It may be cheesy, but it is an adorable, funky, cheesy! If that made any sense at all...

[watermelon.]

Spring

The clouds roll away,
we celebrate mother's day,
the grass gets greener,
the air gets cleaner.
The flowers start to grow,
no more snow.
Winter is gone,
get up and mow your lawn
-watermelonyum11

I know, it's cheesy but I'm not much of a poem writer

Ha ha I love this! It may be cheesy, but it is an adorable, funky, cheesy! If that made any sense at all...

Thanks

[NopesaurusRexx]

This is the poem I came up with for the contest thing. How is it?

The paper white on the bathroom sink.
He walks away, pain coursing through.
A look at the pictures behind the chair,
A turn, to the pictures on the wall.
A family, a legacy,
It’s been a while, but they all are there.
His heart is heavy,
Heart is full.
The pain unbearable as he sits,
It’s been a long winter,
The clock has been waiting,
The timer ticking.
Clock chimes one,
Darkness prevails.
Clock chimes five,
The note is ripped before she sees.
He made it one more day,
Life is tough, but he won’t break.

[borneofash]

I have a part of a story that I need someone to read over and give me tips on, PM me please?

[catra]

Most of you here don't know that I was born in São Paulo, São Paulo, Brazil.
I was browsing YouTube and I found a video about a homeless man in São Paulo that writes poetry.
It was really touching to me, because I know how things are back home and he is so hopeful...

[ailurophile.]

Hey guys... I'm thinking about making a thread about encouraging and help people who are bullied. Do you think that is a good idea? Also, I need some smoothians who are passionate in writing to write stories about encouraging people and help people to fight back bullies. Do you guys think that is a great idea? Please give me some comments about it. Thank you.