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[Rebel Faery]

I have an idea for a story and I was wondering if anybody could help me with sorting out the plot?

It's going to be about a fourteen-year-old girl who has some sort of supernatural secret (I was thinking of making her a siren, or maybe a vampire?). The secret is revealed on a global basis, and all the people suffering from it are being locked up in underground facilities to prevent widespread panic. The girl has a penpal who she continues to write to, and he promises to come and find her. I was thinking some other stuff could happen but I'm not entirely sure what. Any ideas?

[~willo o' wisps~]

Probably the penpal actually doesn't come get her because he's a spy for the underground facility. So whatever the girl tells the penpal, then the penpal tells the head of the underground facility.

[Rebel Faery]

Probably the penpal actually doesn't come get her because he's a spy for the underground facility. So whatever the girl tells the penpal, then the penpal tells the head of the underground facility.

Wow, that's an amazing idea! Thanks so much

[~willo o' wisps~]

Your welcome

[Dylan Klebold]

Username: son.of.flynn
What we will call you: Flynn's fine.
Will you critique other's work?: Maybe
Links to your story if you have any: Back in Steelport
Anything you want us to know?: Well, I mainly write fanfictions. Back in Steelport is my current project. (I'm professor.zinki on there :3)

[Rolly-chan]

Probably the penpal actually doesn't come get her because he's a spy for the underground facility. So whatever the girl tells the penpal, then the penpal tells the head of the underground facility.

Wow, that's an amazing idea! Thanks so much

I also think it's a really good idea ^^ I like the general idea too - that it's exposed on a global level. Would be a different take on all the vampire and other creature stories.

What do you want it to be about? How the vampires (or whatever you decide them to be) fight for their rights? How they try to escape the underground prison? Or something smaller scaled? Like the relationship between your girl and the penpal?

[Artesian]

Probably the penpal actually doesn't come get her because he's a spy for the underground facility. So whatever the girl tells the penpal, then the penpal tells the head of the underground facility.

Wow, that's an amazing idea! Thanks so much

I also think it's a really good idea ^^ I like the general idea too - that it's exposed on a global level. Would be a different take on all the vampire and other creature stories.

What do you want it to be about? How the vampires (or whatever you decide them to be) fight for their rights? How they try to escape the underground prison? Or something smaller scaled? Like the relationship between your girl and the penpal?

That's a fantastic idea! It could have a really heart-breaking twist, or even a double twist, where the penpal switches sides...

[~willo o' wisps~]

Hey so this is chapter 1 of my book, what do you think:

She looked out into the distance as her brother climbed the hill.

“Brother, when will they Earthlings-or whatever they call themselves- get off of our planet?” She asked, her striped tail twitching in annoyance.

“Jackie, it'll be awhile....” he trailed, he knew how his little sister felt, as they were twins.

“But, they've been here long enough. I'm tired of the testing,” she sighed. “Be patient, Mother and Father will get rid of them,” he answered. “Jake, no. They can't be here forever,” Jackie argued. Jake shook his head then kept climbing the tall hill, his sister followed along slower then ever. He had to agree with Jackie about the problem.
He reached the top and looked at the institute, the Earthlings set it up awhile back.

“Jackie, stay here,” Jake commanded, “I'm going to explore the institute.” with that he started sliding down, slowly. He hit a rock then rolled onto his stomach, doing an army-crawl like how his Father did, he neared the institute. Alarms started blaring as he was a couple feet back. He jumped up to his feet and started running towards the white building, bullets were shooting at him but he was to fast for them to penetrate his skin. He touched the building and saw Earthlings nearing him, he was cornered at this time. The teen neko tried to slide under their feet but one Earthling grabbed him by the tail, letting out a holler in pain, he changed into his animal form. He was a tiger now and the Earthling held out sticks that had blue electric lines going through the top. He growled and backed up.

His sister was running down the hill, yelling, “Don't touch my brother you b**tards!” The Earthlings looked at her and Jake ran out, he was touched by the electric stick the he fell down, blue lines covered his striped body. He changed into a human again and saw his sister was still running. The Earthling evacuated and dragged the boy into the institute. 'I won't be allowed out of the building now,' Jake thought.

He woke up in a room with other nekos and creatures. “We thought you were dead!” a voice yelled. Jake looked up and saw a pheonix looking down at him. “Well, I'm glad that I'm not,” Jake said, he wasn't scared of the pheonix because she was his best-friend. “Dude, how'd you get in here?” the pheonix asked. “Kaitlyn, it's a long story,” he answered, “but what about you? How'd you get in here?” “Um...I don't want to answer that...” Kaitlyn trailed.

[Silent Mist]

Username: ~*Wild Horses*~
What we will call you: Wild Horses, Wild
Will you critique other's work?: Possibly, if I have time(: I want to be as helpful as I can.
Links to your story if you have any: I don't have any posted on this website right now...
Anything you want us to know?: I am in high school, I love to write and express myself through acting. I will try to be on as much as possible. I hope that when I do post stories or ideas here you all will be honest and tell me what you think(:

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First chapter of my story is up. c: