Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby Thing Two » Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:33 am

Lol, sure, what do you us think of this entry, it took me ages to write, it's really long.
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Well open up your mind and see like me
Open up your plans and damn you're free
Look into your heart and you'll find love love love love

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I guess what I be saying is there ain't no better reason
To rid yourself of vanities and just go with the seasons
It's what we aim to do, our name is our virtue
-Jason mraz, I'm yours


You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world, old man, but you do have some say in who hurts you. I like my choices. I hope she likes hers.
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby Thing One » Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:35 am

yes, I was very surprised when I first saw it ... sooo long. (: it was a bit surprising too (the content) cant wait to see whats up with jay and Jacqui.
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I've been spending way too long checking my tongue in the mirror
And bending over backwards just to try to see it clearer
But my breath fogged up the glass
And so I drew a new face and laughed

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Listen to the music of the moment, people dance and sing
We're just one big family
And it's our God-forsaken right to be loved loved loved loved loved
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby TheBeautifulDarkness » Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:36 am

I love it! It was very good
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Wed Jan 23, 2013 2:18 am

D'aww, Flynn cares about Tiffer! <3 How cute~
There were few little typos here and there, but they weren't very noticeable, so.. Yeah. .w. pretty ironic to hear this from someone who makes typos all the time orz
It was nice to read a long entry, it kept me entertained. c:

Keep up the good job! ^w^

By the way, for some unknown reason, I'll throw this here even though I don't have a clue do you accept these 'guest pets' anymore orz! (`・ω・´) *SHOT*

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Pet's name: Mira
Personality: A stubborn and a hardworking girl, who has a kind heart and a soft spot for little kids.
How would your like your pet featured in the diary: A new kid in the town/city, and maybe a new classmate? o3o Can become Tiffany's friend, if you want to, or just a fellow classmate.
Other: I'll go and cry in a corner now.. (┳◇┳)
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby Thing Two » Wed Jan 23, 2013 6:27 pm

Dear diary
Today was awesome, in so many ways. I the morning I got up in a grump. Red felt that I was sad and slept on my bed, now that the dolls are gone he is much more relaxed. Anyway, I got to school, thank goodness everyone was wearing normal clothes and I hadn't stuffed up again. I got to class, and being a bit earlier I noticed that there were some new pets in class, one of them really stood out, he was really strange, his name is Dexter he was really strange, I didn't notice him yesterday and he was wearing this crown. He was just sitting in the corner glancing around at everyone with his red eyes, they were so scary. The was this other new girl, her name is Mira, she saw me looking at him and agreed that he was real creepy, she told me she hadn't met him before but heard that his name was Dexter. She's really nice and pretty. I'm surprised Sophie hasn't already taken her in. Probably Sophie doesn't want to be friends with someone who is prettier than her. Well, anyway, Flynn was really late, he came in about 5 minutes after the bell. It was so awkward between us, you could almost fast the awkwardness in the air. It turns out this girl Mira is in some of my classes. At intervil me and Mira ate together then Sydney came over and sat with us, asking me if I could show her around today. Flynn came over and asked is he could talk to me, and guess what? He asked me out! I mean, I am officially Flynn's girlfriend, I'm so happy. Anyway, I showed Sydney around then she ran off to hang out with her new friends, the twins, Penelopi (Pea) and Todd, they are the most adorable things ever. After lunch I had science, we were asked to get in pairs to do a test, Mira or Flynn wasn't in my class and I didn't know anyone exept jay and well, I thought he was ignoring me but obviously not, he came over and asked me to be his pair. He was acting all weird but freindly, I tried asking him why he was ignoring me and he just looked at me strange and said that he wasn't. It's really strange, I didn't mention anything else about it though. After school Sydney had a dentist appointment and Flynn walked me home. He is so sweet, all last year I thought he was some cute, jerk that wanted to be popular but he's not, he's really sweet and nice. He kissed me on the cheek again and I've been all happy for the rest of the afternoon, oh well, off to sleep!

Goodnight!
Tiff.
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Well open up your mind and see like me
Open up your plans and damn you're free
Look into your heart and you'll find love love love love

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I guess what I be saying is there ain't no better reason
To rid yourself of vanities and just go with the seasons
It's what we aim to do, our name is our virtue
-Jason mraz, I'm yours


You don't get to choose if you get hurt in this world, old man, but you do have some say in who hurts you. I like my choices. I hope she likes hers.
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Wed Jan 23, 2013 9:15 pm

I seriously just aww'd. <3
Flynn better be a good boyfriend, or someone will be thrown out from a window. >:T
I feel so happy for Tiffer, eek! >w<

Waiting for updates in excitement and happiness!
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby Thing One » Thu Jan 24, 2013 5:28 am

ha. watch out Flynn, I can jst SEE a fight coming in with jay in perspective. ;)
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And bending over backwards just to try to see it clearer
But my breath fogged up the glass
And so I drew a new face and laughed

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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Thu Jan 24, 2013 5:36 am

ℓσνє.уσυ wrote:ha. watch out Flynn, I can jst SEE a fight coming in with jay in perspective. ;)

Same here. XD
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby Wolfypoof » Thu Jan 24, 2013 8:03 pm

I like this! I shall become your new stalker (if you don't mind) >:DD
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Re: Tiffany's Diary (A CS Pets Diary)

Postby Rainbow Crystal » Fri Jan 25, 2013 6:14 am

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Personality:Moth is a shy,innocent dog who gets bullied for his creepy appearance
How would you like your pet to be featured in the diary:A dog who always seen being bullied by bullies.
Other:I was interested in this and decided this pet could have a chance being in a diary. :)
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