Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

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MACI!!!!
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Dustin
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 4:30 am

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"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

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I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 8:46 am

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Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:18 am

bump!
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby Blargh-Pc » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:25 am

Do you have a transformice account? The title- It sounds familiar
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:32 am

No sorry. ;) I've searched the title to make sure it wasn't taken and all I found was an observatory :)
Quotes of the moment.
"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

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I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby Blargh-Pc » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:36 am

Than, I could possibly know you from school? I know it sounds crazy, but there was this girl writing a story on her phone and she showed it to me. >.< She called it undiscovered Worlds I beleive. I'm not sure, I could be wrong. (By the way I like your story. xD IF you have the chance you could read mine)
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:40 am

Sorry, I don't believe so. :) Only a few people know I'm writing it and I've never showed anyone from school except my best friend who is also on this site. ;) It's cool that we have the same title though! :lol: Thanks! I will definitely go check out your story! :D
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"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

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I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby Blargh-Pc » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:47 am

Thanks for the comment :3 And once school starts Imma start interviewing my friend . . . e.e Tsk tsk... Lol. xD
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Re: Undiscovered Worlds- LOOKING FOR CRITIQUE!!! <3

Postby LuvFinnick123 » Sun Jan 06, 2013 10:48 am

Haha! No problem! Your story is amazing!
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"We're all a little broken. Then one day someone shows up with the missing pieces and puts them together. And that's what we call love."
Song of the moment. Waiting for Superman -Daughtry
Catchphrase of the moment. Bless your soul.
TV show/Movie of the moment. Frozen

.......

I'm currently writing a Fantasy Fiction story called Undiscovered Worlds. It is about three teenagers who are transfered to a school for magic. Evil is arising though, and the teens may be the only ones who can save the school and the world from the peril that arises! Here is the introduction if you're interested! If you want to read more please PM me!!!
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Postby Blargh-Pc » Sun Jan 06, 2013 11:11 am

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