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Postby natures-daughter » Tue Dec 25, 2012 11:28 am

Not really, I'll add a picture on the front soon. My pc is broke so I'm on my phone.
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Postby nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 11:28 am

m i s t y p e l t wrote:
Haha, I don't think so. His hairs kinda like his trade mark I guess. But Jared will show up a lot now.


oh yay! good trade mark. It suites him. Jared Jared Jared! i don't know why, i just like Jared for some reason.
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Postby Qiokkabee » Tue Dec 25, 2012 1:54 pm

My sister had a character named Jared used in Roleplays, drawn, spoken abot at her school all the time XD
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Postby natures-daughter » Tue Dec 25, 2012 4:46 pm

This Jared is more friendly and open. Just not so popular. He makes friends easy.
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ᶤˢ ᵗʰᵃᵗ ᵐᵉᵃᶰᵗ ᵗᵒ ᶤᶰˢᵘˡᵗ ᵐᵉ?

ᶤ ʷᵒᵘˡᵈ ʳᵉᵗᵘʳᶰ ᵗʰᵉ ˢˡᵃᵖ ᶤᶠ ᶤ ᵗʰᵒᵘᵍʰᵗ ʸᵒᵘ ᵃ ᵐᵃᶰ.

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Postby nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:03 pm

hm.... interesting.... One question. Why did he pick on Astella so much? earlier in the book.
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Postby natures-daughter » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:10 pm

Derek?
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Postby nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:14 pm

Derek. Yep! that guy. Omg! big realization.... what if there is a love triangle between Jared, Derek, and Astella?
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Postby natures-daughter » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:20 pm

Yea somewhat, but it doesn't revolve around that. Just something added in there, haha. And Derek was being a jerk: 1. Because that's how he is sometimes 2. Because he didn't want to believe that the fourth hybrid was his friend. He would know if she actually reacted at his words and by the impact of the hit or what she did. Make sense?
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Postby nivans.piers » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:24 pm

Nice extra, adds spice to the story!^^ ah, i understand now. It was like, really random. But now it's all cleared up. Thank you!
When's the next chapter coming out? sorry, i just love this a lot.
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Postby natures-daughter » Tue Dec 25, 2012 5:29 pm

Well since tomorrow (well today because its midnight here) is Chistmas I'll be pretty busy so hopefully by sometime at night. If not the next morning c:
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