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Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by sherbertluver2 » Fri Sep 07, 2012 2:34 pm

It did help! I know it isn't perfect (not even close), and constructive criticism really help! :3 Thanks! I'm going to try and fix it too.

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Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by yoyo8888 » Sat Sep 08, 2012 6:40 am

Cool, I'm glad it helped.

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Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by -Superman- » Sat Sep 08, 2012 1:32 pm

I love it and would like to read more!

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Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by sherbertluver2 » Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:24 am

Awesome, I'll write soon

Check out my new story! Feedback is encouraged! http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1355056

Won't be on as much because of school.
I'm friends with ccheerandlax! and ndusknvs so please do not ban us.
WANTED: PPS pets, especially August Lion!! Trade or PM me!

sherbertluver2: Posts: 1180; Joined: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:51 am; My pets; My items; My wishlist; My gallery; My scenes; My dressups; Trade with me

Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by -Superman- » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:13 am

You should write more.

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Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by sherbertluver2 » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:51 am

I've been really busy but I will try soon

Check out my new story! Feedback is encouraged! http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1355056

Won't be on as much because of school.
I'm friends with ccheerandlax! and ndusknvs so please do not ban us.
WANTED: PPS pets, especially August Lion!! Trade or PM me!

sherbertluver2: Posts: 1180; Joined: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:51 am; My pets; My items; My wishlist; My gallery; My scenes; My dressups; Trade with me

Re: My Dirty Little Secret Feedback Needed :D

by -Superman- » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:54 am

Dont worry it's all good.

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