Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter seven added.}

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter five added.}

Postby catt; » Mon Jul 23, 2012 7:57 am

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter five added.}

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter five added.}

Postby catt; » Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:02 am

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter five added.}

Postby catt; » Mon Jul 23, 2012 10:40 am

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter five added.}

Postby catt; » Mon Jul 23, 2012 2:36 pm

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter six added.}

Postby catt; » Mon Jul 23, 2012 6:45 pm

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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter six added.}

Postby fly away. » Mon Jul 23, 2012 6:52 pm

I'm really enjoying this. :) Please keep up the great writing..

Just as a tiny note, sometimes you tend to switch tenses, not too often, but you may want to try and fix that. But it's quite good.
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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter seven added.}

Postby catt; » Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:36 am

Thank you, and that often happens to me, it's a strange habit of mine. x3
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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter seven added.}

Postby Moceanu » Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:06 pm

Bad habit of mine as well o.o My friends always point it out.
"remember how we forgot?
remember how no one ever really died in the wars we fought?
because each gunshot came from our fingertips
and we never really kept them loaded, just in case
because each enemy was a friend and none of it was about oil, religion or land
it was all just pretend;
remember how we used to bend reality
like we were circus strong men
like our imaginations were in shape then
like we were all ninjas trained in the deadly art of "did not"
like "i totally got you!"
"...did not"
remember how we forgot?"
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Re: Eɴsʟᴀᴠᴇᴅ.. {Chapter seven added.}

Postby catt; » Wed Jul 25, 2012 5:00 am

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