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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby daz » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:23 am

"Help! please! someone... i can't... i can't breath..." Dustysky wheezed.

Everything went dark, clouds covering his veiw. he yelled, "No! Moonclan! no! i'm not ready to die!" (Moonclan is their warrior ancestors in the sky, each star at night is a warrior who died watching them)

"Help!" he cried.

Then he felt somthing grab his scruff, he stared around. but his eyes clouded completley and all was dark. finally he started to feel cool. his dry throut felt nice, and soothed. his eyes opened gently to stare up at Roseheart and Berrypaw.

"Berrypaw, fetch me some poppy seeds. his pain from this wound will spread quickly." Roseheart murmered.

Berrypaw darted over to a small crevice... where was hunting rocks? he thought.

"R-roseheart... where are w-we?" Dustysky wheezed.

"Don't talk, you must rest your throut. smoke filled hunting rocks, trees fell. so we have started our travel to a new home. you were lucky Graypaw and Conner had saved you. you would've surely died... but bravely indeed. tryng to save Foxstar and Hollykit together."

Dustysky jerked his head up, coughed, then lay still, "Fox-s-star... is he ok? Hollykit t-to. and did you say... Conner?"
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:48 am

mmnmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeeee





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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby daz » Tue Jul 17, 2012 4:59 am

i will soon!
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby frozenmoons » Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:32 am

A-maz-ing (!!!!!!!!!!!) there's only one more word to say....MMMOOORRRREEE!!!!!
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby daz » Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:55 am

haha! ok! I'll write more soon Dark!
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby frozenmoons » Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:13 pm

Do it, do itttt!
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby daz » Tue Jul 17, 2012 12:34 pm

"Yes. i said Conner. he's a kittypet at-"

"I know who he is... h-how did he s-sa-ve me?" Dustysky protested.

Roseheart sighed, "Ah. ok. he saved his Twolegs, then saw the forset was on fire. he rushed in, found and saved Graypaw, and then saved you. he said he wishes to live with us, but Foxstar is still reviving. and Hollykit was winded, but alive."

Dustysky suddenly wheezed and strained as his body rippled vainly, "Wha-whats wrong with m-me Rose-Rose.."

He coughed violently and everything went black. all lost.


"No Hollykit! no! don't die!" cried Foxkit.

Hollykit wheezed lightly and smiled, "I'm not going to die you stupid fur ball. i'm only winded... not s bad as Dustysky though. i wouldn't be here if it wasn't for him... or Graypaw and Conner. thank Moonclan for Conner!"

Foxkit and Lilykit nuzzled into their sister when Berrypaw aprouched, "Leave her alone a while kits, she needs her rest."

They nodded and padded over to Dustysky. he sat motionless next to Brightrock. at first she thought he was dead, but then she saw his gentle breathing of his body. releived she sat down and shared toungues with Lilykit. tomarow was when they arrived at the mountains... but would they even make it? what if Dustysky didn't? that was somthing Foxkit couldn't stop thinking.
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby frozenmoons » Tue Jul 17, 2012 3:48 pm

....Oh. NO. What are they gonna dooo???? I'm gonna be up all night now. Blehfds;gh!!!
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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 17, 2012 3:56 pm

Dark-Magik367 wrote:....Oh. NO. What are they gonna dooo???? I'm gonna be up all night now. Blehfds;gh!!!

Lol. Let's not hope you DIE in the next two days. xD were spending the night at her house....





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Re: The Small outcasts.

Postby Major and Junie » Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:41 am

haha thats funny Dawn!!!
and cool what r they going to do?!?!?!
ummmm so get to work and well work so we can have moorreee
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