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Prologe:
Long ago it was said that all cats and all dogs ran free though out the world. They were every where. Human's feared them and befriended them. But if the humans were so great why aren't they now?

Qustions....
Answear's......
Shocks.......

Do legends lie? I hope they don't, but they do. At lest here. Any human we know are vile, cruel and horrbile filthy beings. But maybe because there twisted evil dudes. Police and such. But here, in this place everyone craves Freedom. Freedom of the place, to become beings of the legends, to live in the forset. To have what the legend beings had. To get away from humans. To know what lays beyound. But how to get there. To be free is all we want. To be free is our food, our craving. Will anyone help us? Can anyone help us?....Unless we find a way out all hope is lost in this old street.....

Navagtion:
Setting
About the story
Character's.
Artwork.
Chapter's.

About The Story:

Setting:

The setting is in our world in one of the vilest place's. An old street littered wit dumpster's, bad house's, bad people, and more danger's with no visable way out. Cats and dogs live amoug it. Police come around alot. A dense green forset lays beyound. A small town is were the street is located. Dirty and filthy. But here dogs and cats age oddly. 1 in human year's is 1 in dog and cat year's.
Dogs and cats must survive what ever danger's there are and what ever the odds may be. All are looking for a way out. None have found it. All want freedom. Most have cruel owner's. there are quite a few fights. Bad things tend to happen. All belive in legends. The ponit of view goes to Silverice then Night Raven. I will put in (()) who tells it.

Character's:

Silverice:
Status:Main Character.
What She's Like: Nice kind and caring towards friends. Hostlie, mean, and rude towards stanger's.
Intersing Facts:
Artwork:

Night Raven:
Status:
What she's like: Uselly ok. Battles over food. Apper's as a bug me I chew your tail off tpye. On a fFull Moon or New Moon she beome's very war like and battles a ton.
Intersting Facts: War Like on Full moons and new moons.
Art Work:

Old Scar Face
Status: Minor Character.
What He's Like: Hostile, mean, scowling. Ok towards frineds.
Intersing Facts: He own s a eye patch.
Artwork:

Lin and family:
Status:Minor and big.
What there like:Lin's family are nice, but if they everlost each other it would not be good. In the third chapter Lin loes's his mate and grand-daughter.
Intersing Facts:Lin recives help.
Artwork:

Fang/Tiger/Wolf
Status:Minnor.
What he's like:mean,hostile,not friendly.
Interesting Facts:He is call Tiger and Wolf.
Artwork: My singy.


Art Work:

Banner: Need's to be uploaded.

Fan's Artwork:

RP's?:
One by me.

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Chapter One: The Way Out.

It was raining. The sky over head was grey and covered with clouds. Splat, splat! Water laned on my head. I shook it off and went to find cover. " Really? I thought it wasn't going to rain Lin!" I yelled to another dog, a German Shepred named Lin. He thoguth it wouldn't rain but his nose is so old it would think a heat wave was coming. But his hearing is like a hawks as well as his eyes. An old friend of mine. "Uhh.....Well my sniffer is a little old!" Line barked back. I laughed, something that sounds like a bark and a howl. Lin seemed to be embassed and came and sat next to me with his grand daughter Lina. She looked at me. She was a germen Shepred too like her grandpa. She was young only about 5. Dog's here age differntly. Linsa came other and sat next to Lin. Lin and Linsa were married. I looked out into the rain and thoguht I saw a pair of jaws that I wouldn't want to meet, and a pair of red eyes. Tehn I dozed off.

The rain had stopped. I woke up. Lin and his family were gone. cat's were out looking for half aten fish. No small wounder. It was night. A cat not far from me had a nasty wound. A missing eye and ear with half a tail cut off. Old Scar Face. small tom cat that most cats didn't care about. But this guy was sneaky as a fox. OSF was his nick name standing for Old Scar Face. Say it with sounds, it sounds like ossff. "Hey OSF. Looking for something?" I said. he shook his head a little and pionted to the dumpster behind me. Ops. That's his favourite one. I moved out of the way and he went into it. Old Scar Face was old, but dangerous. I went home to a little shealter I made.

Home was a metal pice held up by tall slab's of wood near an old house that was next to a dumpster. Other cats and dogs lived here, but it was fine. " Grrrr....Rah! What the heck are you doing here?" Yowled a old tom. Old Scar Face maybe. He has that raspy voice. I looked towards the battle. A old tom and a young tom were fightig over a old rooom in the house. I ingored it. The battle raged on. Insult's were thrown and and hissing was so loud that the next city could hear it. I sighed and barked. The fight stopped. " I'll deal with you later" The old tom hissed. I barked again and he scarttered away. I looked out of my hiome to the forset......Then my eyes focsed on the fence's surrounded the forset. My eyes saw something else....something hidden. It was a small hole big enough for a large dog to squze though. Then I saw ehre it lead. To the forset...The green place of freedom that I craved. Tommorow I'll tell Lin and his family....tommorow. Then I dozed off again.

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Chapter Two: Battle Rage. ((Night Raven will tell this part.))

Snap! Grrrr.... The sounds of battle floded my ears. I snaped, jumped, grolwed and pounced. The jerk across from me had stole food. I looked to him. " Grrrr.....Give me my food, or else!" I snarled and clawed him. He responed " What is a little puppy gonna do about it?" and he laughed. "I'll chew your tail right off!" I snaped. The dog closed his mouth and attacked. I attacked at the same time. Soon we were just a ball of fur and attacks. I snaped his belly, he nipped my ear, I nipped his. The rain still went ruining my vesion. The dog staggered and droped, pushing over food. Good. I took it and walked towards a dumpster with an over hang. Rain pounded the roof and I listened. A tom cat appered. Old Scar Face. Tough little cat. I welcomed him in. " Hello. rabbit?" I asked him. He took some. Feash cut's showed on him and he murmered " Just a fight." He ate up. Rain punded harder. i looked at the sky. A grey-blue sky with grey-black clouds. Glomy sky, glomy setting. Then I looked to the nearby forset, sniffing in the scents of the unknown, looking at the plants. Craving the forset.....I shook myself out of the daydreams and looked towards the horzion. The setting sun glowed red. I dozed off.

Battle sounds woke me up. I looked to the sky. No more ran. A full moon hung in the sky. Uh oh. A full moon makes me war like......I grolwed at the battler's and my eyes glowed red. I spaing into battle snarling. The cats saw me and hissed at me. I snarled and grolwed and then nipped both. A full three way battle broke out and formed into four way. Suddnly a loud bark broke the battle. I clawed them again and snarled. Then I went off silping into the shadows. I didn't glance back just looked for another battle. But a nagging voice told me to grab a hold of myself.....I ingored and went on ward to the sounds of another battle.((Shorter chapter.))

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Chapter Three: "Poor Lin. He's heart Borken."((Silverice tells this.))

Awakig and stopping a fight. Great start to the day! I went hunting and caught a big rabbit that was stolen! Greater! And then I bumped into an old buddy and had a fight! Great!

I know worse start ever. Anyways as I wlaked along stomach grolwing I found that rabbit covered in mud. I picked it up and ate it anyways. The rabbit was chewy and muddy. Looking around I saw a big Doberman not far. He was one of the toughest things in this place. His name was Fang, But most called him Tiger or Wolf. Powerful too. He seemed to be fighting a smaller dog. I walked over careful not to disturbe Fang. He yelled "Give that rabbit back!" And chased a slender shape. Probably a cat. I sniffed and smlled cat and dobermans. Oh uh....Fang brought back up. Three dobermen leaned over me snarling. I took off like a jet runing as fast as I could for cover.

Panting I looked behind me. Hour's had passed since the dobermen had chased me. I hid a few times but not for long. I only had one chasing me, the other's were hunting. Bone, the one chasing me was angry. I had stole something from him once. After awhile it seemed like all three were done for now. I found a safe spot and hid....and I heard crying. I looked behind me and saw Lin. The old gremen shepred sat behind me crying. I asked" Lin? Are you ok?" He said "No....Linsa and Lina are gone...I've lost them." A another dog came towards me. It had a balck coat flecked with silver and a silver underside. He whipsered "Lin?...Silverice?" All of a sudden it came back to me.

I was playing with my mom and sisters and brother. My father was getting food,when another dog with a black coat and silver underside walked up. I hid behind my mom. The dog was silghtly bigger. "Hi there! want to play?" I nodded. That day was great.
My flash back must of startled my childhood friend. "N-Night Raven?" I said. She nodded. Thenh we both said "Poor Lin. He's heat broken." Lin nodded. I said "We'll help you get them back Lin."

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Thanks everyone who voted! I might keep the poll going longer. Most of the peoples on CS seem to like it! WEll the next chapter is going to be delayed. Friends,Family and that stuff. But here`s a sneak peak!:

Chapter Four: the demons. ((Night Raven))

((This is a part deeper into the chapter.))

I cricled the dog with glowing red eyes and oversized teeth. I snarled "Give the food, puppy." The dog leaped at me. In that spilt second I saw smoke ingulf it's body, the dog was a leaping smoke shadow in the shape of a dog. The red eyes glowed like coals, it's teeth slobber shined like silver. Then the monment was over and I leaped at it. We landed on the ground tussling. I noticed the dog's stength. It was better then the other half-staved dog's here. In that monment I knew I couldn't win...

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Another sneak peak! Of course I haven't finshed the chapter:

((Earlier in the chapter))((Still Night Raven))

WQhen Silverice tyold Lin about the way out his face brightned. "T-They might have gone that way!" He rasped. His eyes wehre full of hope and his tail wagged. I noded. And that's when the first sounds of a batttle flodded my ears. I looked around and foud my slef in the middle of a battle field. The cement was blood stained and black dogs and cats stood across form the cats and dogs of the alley. Most of the Alley dogs and cats looked tried, but there eyes shone with the will to go on.... I shook the image out of my head panting. Lin looked hopeful as Silverice talked about the hole...But I kept on hearing the wail I heard at the end of the image...Lin's Wail.

Oooooo. Doesn't it sound good?

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((Oooo. Looky!))

Chpater Four: The Demons((Night Raven))

Lin let me and Silverice sleep with him. In the morning he shook us awake and said " So about Lina and Linsa.." Silverice nodded and told Lin about the way out. When Silverice finshed telling Lin about the way out his face brightned. "T-They might have gone that way!" He rasped. His eyes wehre full of hope and his tail wagged. I noded. And that's when the first sounds of a batttle flodded my ears. I looked around and foud my slef in the middle of a battle field. The cement was blood stained and black dogs and cats stood across form the cats and dogs of the alley. Most of the Alley dogs and cats looked tried, but there eyes shone with the will to go on.... I shook the image out of my head panting. Lin looked hopeful as Silverice talked about the hole...But I kept on hearing the wail I heard at the end of the image...Lin's Wail.

It was at least an hour after hearing Lin's wail. I knew nobody else heard it. I was out hunting, staying away from any fights. If Lin wailed like that...Well it made me shiver. If that was what the price of freedom was, would Lin risk it? Lin was a guy that cared alot for his family. Ever in that vesion he was in pain or....I shook the thought from my head and walked on, sniffing for prey. All I smelt was stail Doberman. Looking to the sky above, I saw it was a cloudy day. Not gloomy.

Hors past until I came back with plenty of prey. Lin and Silverice looked hopeful until I told them about the vesion. "Lin...You don't think?" Lin shook his head. His eyes were glazed over and he looked lost in thought. he shook his head again. He waved us away saying he needed time. Silverice and I wandered until... A big black dog stole my food and ran after it. I cricled the black dog with glowing red eyes and oversized teeth. I snarled "Give the food, puppy." The dog leaped at me. In that spilt second I saw smoke ingulf it's body, the dog was a leaping smoke shadow in the shape of a dog. The red eyes glowed like coals, it's teeth slobber shined like silver. Then the monment was over and I leaped at it. We landed on the ground tussling. I noticed the dog's stength. It was better then the other half-staved dog's here. In that monment I knew I couldn't win... I pined the dog and grabbed the food. Runing faster then ever before I told Silverice when I reached her. She muttered "You not wining,Lin,What is going on?" The last part was yell. Silverice and I wanted out, but not at that price!

Trodding along in the afternoon heat we came across dogs and cats that looked like the last. I woundered who and what they were....

Ooooo!

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Chapter Five:K-9((Silverice))

It was days after the big black dog with red eyes. The prey was going away. people had heard of the big black dog and the cats. they called them Demons. You could see one or two gurading the hole out. Everytime you went near them they snarled or hissed. Everyone was scared of them. I was passing the hole and one came at me. I ran while the Demon chaced me around a conner...right into Bone. Uh-oh. Not good. I ran past Bone as he yelled "Were are you going?" And then Bone must of spoted the Demon cause i heard whimping. I looked back and saw the Demon on my trail. It snarled and growled. Solber was hanging off it's oversized teeth. A cat joine the dog demon. Now I had two chasing me. Greater. Both were angery,there red eyes seemed to glow. I saw a dumpster up ahead. I leaped onto it an then onto an old fire escape. I got to the top of the building and looked down. I had lost the Demons. I sat down panting. Those Deamons could really annoy me. I head a battle. Probably some dog or cat picking a fight with a Demon. Ever since them we had less fight among our sleves and more with them. The Demons were like gurads. We had to give them prey if we mis behaved and got beat if we battled with them. But some were hopeful. the Demons carried hope. The hole was now known to everyone. Everyone called it The Freedom Hole. Of course few even went by it because of the Demons. Everything now a days came back to the Demons. Our hope,our no freedom,our dreams,our scars basicly were all thanks to the Demons. Now that everyone thought of it they had seen a big black dog with red eyes and oversized teeth before the Demons came. But they were now in dozens. Why?

When I got down from the building I saw a dog I had enver seen before. They had a silver coat with the odd storm grey. But I didn't bother. I went to Night Raven. "Hey...how's Lin? These stuipd Demons are horrbile!" I said to her. "Lin's ok...I guess." She said. Of course i knew that. But with such low spirits I thought it would good to ask. i went to Lin. "Hello. Well I got chased by two Demons today! At least I think so. They looked like overgrown kittens and puppys!" I said to him. He let out a weak laugh. He missed Linsa and Lina. But we were doing all we could. I went to Night Raven and said "I saw a new dog today. They were a little large. No coller and not a Demon." Night Raven nodded. A light drizzle had started. then I heard something. Battle. Looks like the Demons were mad. I went to see what was happening. The sight I saw surpised me. Bone was fighting with the dog I saw earlyer. The dog was saying "I didn't take it." But Bone wasn't listening. My eyes darted from Bone to the stanger. Bone suddenyl stopped in the middle of a snarl. A Demon was coming. Bone darted away but the stanger stayed. "Hello there Shadow." The stanger siad to the Demon who must of been called Shadow. Shadow nodded and said "Good day to you K-9." And trotted away. I went to the stanger. "Hello. I couldn't help but to notice you know that....dog. Shadow I think his name was ?" I said. the Stanger said "Ya. There always popping up in the forset. I'm K-9. Shadow there is one I know. You see just stay on there good sides and everything's fine." K-9 said. I repelyed "OK...I am Silverice. What breed are you anyways?" "Ermm...wolf." K-9 answeared. I stuttered "B-b-b-" and was cut off by K-9 "I know."

When I got back I told night Raven. WIP