{ ＩＮＫＬＩＮＧＳ } A Thread For Writers

[Espeon101010]

That's my brother's favorite series of books! I like the idea, though I've never read them before

Does anyone have a good apocalyptic idea that involves the light in the world changing? Not going out or growing intense, but that could just change the world?

[Sila]

Something like someone taking the light and making it really expensive for people to buy so crops die and anything that needs light dies? Lol that is sort of like Phineas and Ferb xD

Or if you don't like that you could make the light change it's color and it is more intense like he heat which dries things out and makes things like fields or forests catch on fire easily

[Espeon101010]

A little, but that might work, thanks

[abandoned.]

soooooo....hey guys ^^'' i don't post here often...and stuff...but yea....sorry about that? i feel terrible.

meh. i have this urge to write, but no ideas. /shootme

[eden .]

write about how frustrated you are, then. XD

if you're bored then you should check my story out and gimme critique, b/c I've been lacking that, BUT I KNOW YOU ALL HAVE SEEN MISTAKES
I KNOW YOU'VE SPOTTED THEM
BECAUSE I HAVE MYSELF.
/shrinks

[abandoned.]

Why would I do that? I wanna write fiction. I wanna write something that looks like yours. .-.

mmm...i will read your story after i finish this character sheet....>_<

[The Only]

soooooo....hey guys ^^'' i don't post here often...and stuff...but yea....sorry about that? i feel terrible.

meh. i have this urge to write, but no ideas. /shootme

Free-write. really, I do that for ten minutes a day at the very least. I find it really fun to look at what i wrote the next day and draw inspiration from it.

Would anybody be willing to Critique my short Story? Here is the link to it: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1326861

[mamba]

I just posted a super quick prologue. Crit please!

Revamped!

*cough*Choey*cough*

[eden .]

Why would I do that? I wanna write fiction. I wanna write something that looks like yours. .-.

mmm...i will read your story after i finish this character sheet....>_<

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA INSPIRATION. I GIVE IT.

no, but seriously
that's flattering you know.
>////<

YUSH.
SUCCESS
because it will only get longer, you know. xD

/scampers off to work on ch. 7

I just posted a super quick prologue. Crit please!

Revamped!

*cough*Choey*cough*

LKFJAL;SKJDF;L
no, kidding. I'll be happy to crit. ^^

They checked through all their books, selecting a certain tube from here, and a specific needle from there.

if you're going to use a comma between "certain tube" and "specific needle", then the sentence should be "certain tube from here, a specific needle from there". otherwise, take out the comma.

in general, it's much better than the first time around.
I'm still a bit clueless on the surroundings, and the bed kind of seems to grow out of the ground, but if that confusion and disorientation is what you're going for, then it's fine.

I noticed you used the word "tube" pretty often -- or at least often enough to think that you used it a lot. perhaps some variation would be nice?

[abandoned.]

Why would I do that? I wanna write fiction. I wanna write something that looks like yours. .-.

mmm...i will read your story after i finish this character sheet....>_<

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA INSPIRATION. I GIVE IT.

no, but seriously
that's flattering you know.
>////<

YUSH.
SUCCESS
because it will only get longer, you know. xD

/scampers off to work on ch. 7

GIMME LE INSPIRATION. actually, i'm gonna go to a random title generator...and see if i come up with something xD