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Chapter 1-The killer shot

Jamie larko and her friend emily crisko were having a sleep over,As jamie got up and quietly tip toed to turn off the bed-room lights.A shot went off,There rottweiler toby barked,The girls ran downstairs and leashed toby.They both led him out to find jamie's mom laying on the grass.Dead.Jamie had tears in her eyes,She wipped them away.She looked at emily."I got toby get my father." emily nodded and went upstairs.Jamie let toby loose,Toby whinnied he licked jamie's mothers hand,Se layed on the grass crying.Jamie's father ran down the steps in his boxers and gray muscel car shirt,He neeled by his wife "Oh camillea." he cried "Don't go." he looked at her and knew she was dead.He ordered jamie and emily to call the police,Soon police came and foud blood shoe stains on her body.They took camillea away and toby sat down.I will kill who ever killed my master. he said in rage,He looked at jamie I'm so sorry jamie,I should have watched her. camillea and jamie's father had a fight that night,About bills.Soon toby got up from the dead grass.He walked up the steps his head low in shame and smiled as jamie comforted him.Emily went home,And jamie and toby layed on the porch that night looking up at the stars,Tomarrow jamie's dad jacob was to bild a large electric fence.Jamie looked at the large field she shighed Mommy,I want you back. she cried tearing thinking to herself.Toby sat by her and nuzzeled her It's okay jamie,I'll kill that man or woman i promise. toby smiled as jamie nodded at him and kissed his forehead.

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Chapter 2-Your chance is now.

Four months latter...
Toby sat at the edge of the fence watching jamie sun tain.He flicked his small tail,He hated the new fence actually.He slipped under it getting a small shock.He started to the woods he met his best friend chloe he other rottweiler,He kinda had a crush on her but not alot.He watched hr trot to him.The both bowed and sat down "Any plans to find thw killer?" Chloe asked "I caught A mans scent." Chloe nodded "Shall we tack it?" Toby nodded "Yes." Chloe smirked.Toby heared jamie call him,He said goodbye and padded off with a huff he smirked.Chloe watched him,she shook her heas and went home herself.

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Chapter 3-The train ride away home.

Toby and chloe had met by the old oak tree in the woods,They planned to take a train to seattel.Chloe and toby trotted across the street toby in front chloe behind him.Toby looked at his surrondings "We will come back." chloe chuckeled "No we won't." toby was ashamed she was right.He hung his head as he trotted,Chloe thought.Would we ever find that killer,Or would we just find a mysterious man? she shook her head,She heared the wheels of trains schreeched.Toby and chloe ran and found a empty food cart,They jumped up and hid,A human closed there doors and they came out.Chloe sat across from toby "Tell me the plans." toby chuckeled "Well i found a mask i have it tucked in my collor to find the man." chloe cocked her head "It's tucked in your collor!" toby nodded.The cart was nice and cool chloe layed down and yawened,She smiled at toby "Good night toby." toby sighed and nodded "Good night chloe." he smiled and layed down,He too fell asleep.He thought about jamie and her father.