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Mind it.

Postby Delicious Soups » Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:59 am

"A computer" said the man in the black suit. "You are so stupid, you won't learn anything." said the man.
I sat there thinking about myself, my mind, my life. I looked at the man I looked at him clearly so he could notice that what he was saying about me and all about what he said. I looked down and closed my eyes.

My mind went blank."Gabriel, eliminate" A voice struck through my head. "No, I said to the man. you don't even know me." I said pretending to walk away from him. I turned towards him and clapped my hands. "sorry, my friend." I said.

I walked out of the adobe building and thought, poor him.

Your probable thinking what happened to the man. His name Is Lucas and he is cursed forever. His problem is he will have countless addictions and constantly be on a drug, and having a smoke.

Now, Gabriel, Me, Is as well cursed with internal burns from radiation from my own casting of curses, and sometimes I die. but my own curse, I live forever with internal burns. Your probable thinking, how did I become a wizard? and in this book, I will tell you how.
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Re: Mind it.

Postby Delicious Soups » Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:47 am

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Re: Mind it.

Postby Delicious Soups » Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:50 am

Hello again, this is my story. Mind your Discretion.

I woke up on an early Monday morning feeling a headache coming. "Ugh, last night sucked kinda" I said feeling regretting last night. What did I regret? well, I thought It would be fun to get addicted to tobacco.
I felt like murdering last night. Usually I wouldn't do stuff like that, but last night, I was just showing off, What a smile.

My life then was just bad. I wasn't thinking I ate my breakfast and left the house. I live in Shelby Idaho 705 n Lyn street. I walked down the road and was heading to my so-called "job" And about halfway there, I collapsed. My mind went black.
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Re: Mind it.

Postby Delicious Soups » Wed Apr 25, 2012 10:52 am

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