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A Sun's Path|Warriors Fan-fic|Chapter 1 up!

Postby . ME » Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:20 am

Since I finished Fear, I decided to make another warriors fan-fiction. This one has NOTHING to do with Fear, it is NOT a sequel or anything. You do NOT have to read Fear if you want to read A Sun's Path. You can if you want, though.

OH, And I apolgize for the terrible prophecy. I know, I am not good with prophecies or rhyming..
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(I do not own the picture of the cat, I got it off of google images! But I did draw that sucky background, with Paint.)


Prologue:

A stormy-grey tabby she-cat lay in the nursery, panting heavily. "Get...Blossomleaf..." She panted to a dark ginger tom. The tom nodded, and said "Okay, I'll go get her, Silentflower!" He said quickly, running off.

Silentflower shivered. Her vision blurred as a cold wind blew inside the den, and her head hurt quite a bit. This was her first litter. As she grew dizzy and her vision blurry, she could just make out the tortoiseshell pelt of Blossomleaf and the dark ginger fur of her mate, Foxshadow.

After a bit of pushing, the kit came. It was one-A ginger tabby she-kit. Silentflower smiled at the kit. "Sunkit..." She whispered, still dizzy. She gasped as she fainted.

She awoke in a starry place. Some of her ancestors surrounded her-She recognized Poppyflame, a dark brown she-cat with red paws and tail-tip, Whitefang, a snow-white tom with a few pale grey patches, and Thrushflight, a pale sandy-grey tom with white paws, chest, and muzzle. But there was two cats she did not recognize. It was a pale grey and white tom kit, and sitting next to him..Was her kit! Sunkit! She gasped. Then words whispered in her mind; After the sun takes its path, it will come down in the blood-bath.

Then she awoke, startled. "You have to keep pushing!" Blossomleaf ordered, fear edging her tone. Quickly nodding, the stormy grey she-cat pushed until another kit slipped out. It was the pale grey and white tom kit! She licked the kits rapidly. Though she was scared, she would love and care for these kits, because they were hers.

She nuzzled Foxshadow and licked his cheek. "Since the first kit is Sunkit, We should name the second kit...Moonkit!" He said cheerfully. Silentflower nodded and let the kits suckle as she proudly looked down at them-But then the whispering words came back into her mind.

After the sun takes its path, it will come down in the blood-bath.

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Chapter One:

"Sunpaw, from this moment you will be known as..." The large tom said, but he didn't finish. "Sunpaw! Sunpaw!" A voice hissed playfully. But she ignored it. "As what!? As what?!" Sunpaw shrieked, but the tom didn't finish. That's when she woke up to her brother prodding her with a paw.

"Sunpaw! Sunpaw!" He hissed playfully. "We have to go on the Dawn Patrol!". The ginger tabby she-cat jumped up. She quickly groomed her fur, and trotted beside Moonpaw to the Dawn Patrol. She hoped they weren't too late.

"Its about time!" Spottedfern growled. Sunpaw flashed an angry glance at the grumpy tortoiseshell and hissed. She walked beside her mentor, Skyfrost, who was also the deputy. She looked at her brother, who was walking with his mentor, Shrewclaw. She came to a halt as her mentor did so. "Intruders on ThunderClan territory!" He whispered.

Sunpaw gasped, along with Moonpaw. Then she saw the intruders-Two WindClan apprentices. They must have crossed the border accidentally while hunting. Skyfrost padded over to the apprentices, leading the rest of the patrol.

"What are you doing on ThunderClan territory?!" Sunpaw hissed, fur fluffed up and claws unsheathed. Moonpaw looked rather..Friendly, though. "Your coming to the Clan with us," Skyfrost said to the apprentice. Sunpaw looked at him. "What?! Let's just fight them!" She said.

But suddenly, one of the apprentices leaped onto Moonpaw, and started to claw at his face. Sunpaw gasped. "You get off my brother, you little whiny runt of a cat!" She yowled, thrusting the tom off. He hissed in her face, and easily pinned her down. He was much older then she was, and probably had more experience. Then, words whispered in her head; After the sun takes its path, it will come down in the blood-bath.

She shivered and looked up. The apprentice seemed shocked. Had he heard it, too? Sunpaw shivered, then pushed off the tom. What had just happened?
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Re: A Sun's Path|Warriors Fan-fic|Chapter 1 up!

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:30 am

Omg SOoo good cant wait fot chap 2
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Re: A Sun's Path|Warriors Fan-fic|Chapter 1 up!

Postby Rainbowdash~ » Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:45 pm

Awesome!
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remember Brightheart…When I see a scar one someone's face
I will think of WindClan...Every time I win a race.
I'll remember Goosefeather...When nobody believes me
I'll remember Scourge...When someone's teased for being tiny
I'll remember Heathertail...When someone wants to be 'just friends'
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Postby growl.lingo » Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:42 am

gah I can't wait <3333333333
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Re: A Sun's Path|Warriors Fan-fic|Chapter 1 up!

Postby . ME » Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:48 pm

I finished the new chapter yesterday, but you wanna know what happened? It took me two hours to write it, so it logged me out due to inactivity...
I was firetruck ticked off when the reply was blank. So I'll write it OVER again today once I get out of school, I guess.
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If you love me let me G O
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The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: A Sun's Path|Warriors Fan-fic|Chapter 1 up!

Postby Rainbowdash~ » Thu Apr 26, 2012 12:15 am

That happened with my book too so I did it over again the next time I copied it just in case:)
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remember Brightheart…When I see a scar one someone's face
I will think of WindClan...Every time I win a race.
I'll remember Goosefeather...When nobody believes me
I'll remember Scourge...When someone's teased for being tiny
I'll remember Heathertail...When someone wants to be 'just friends'
My sister also plays- sometimes we share computers
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Postby growl.lingo » Thu Apr 26, 2012 2:16 am

oh gosh that must've been horrifying for you ;A;
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