The scream...

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OK here is my story but it's very short. Please post critics and comments about it!


Penelope turned out the light in her bedroom. Then she heard a scream…
Quickly she turned the light back on. She looked around then out of the nearby window; however, it was so dark outside that she could see nothing except the full moon beaming down at her. Then she heard a voice beside her. She swivelled around in her bed and saw Danny Homes looking at her with a worried expression on her face. Danny had came round for a sleepover. Although she was fifteen most people would think Danny was around the age of eleven if they didn’t know her properly. She was shy most the time and would turn as pale as a ghost if she heard a sound in the night. And right now she had. Penelope knew she would have to think of an excuse right away or she would start crying.
“It’s… ummm… probably… uhhh… a … cat.” she lied.
Danny just nodded and snuggled deeper into her sleeping bag. Penelope then turned out the light again and went to sleep.
Penelope woke feeling a prod on her shoulder. She opened her eyes sleepily and saw Danny leaning over her.
“ What is it?” she asked
“ I couldn’t get to sleep last night. I was really scared of the noise. Could we go see what it is? “ Danny replied.
“ Fine. Let me get dressed first though.”
After Penelope had got dressed she and Danny had headed downstairs. Now Penelope was opening the front door. When she looked outside she gasped. On the blood-stained grass was a dead body.
“What is it” Danny asked.
Then Danny leaned in closer.
“ Ahhhhhhh!” she screamed.
She then started to try to run away but Penelope quickly grabbed her wrist to stop her.
“ Let’s… have a look…” Penelope said trying to keep her voice brave but failing.
She walked towards the body and heard Danny following behind her.
When she reached it she gasped. It was Mrs.Budzinska, the Polish teacher in Penelope's school. Then Penelope gasped again as she heard heavy footsteps behind her. She took a step back and swiveled round. he felt like she needed to scream. It was Mrs.Budzinska's killer.

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