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Do you like it?

Yes! It's awesome!
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It's sooo sad!!
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No, I hated it and you should quit writing.
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No, I loved it!!!
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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:33 am

I guess my writing's just too terrible and everybody hates it...
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Re: What do you think?

Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:38 am

Nooooooooo! Your an amazing writer and need to keep going, that was a wonderful and sad peice of writing, Keep going!
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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:40 am

Look at the pole's results...
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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:12 pm

I honestly wanted to be a photographer/writer, but thanks to the one person tha said he/she hated it and wanted me to quit writing, I think I will.
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Re: What do you think?

Postby the weeknd » Tue Apr 24, 2012 1:21 pm

Taisi wrote:I typed it the night I found out... I couldn't sleep, so I wrote my feelings out.

I'm sorry for your loss. I think you should create a forum that takes cat donations in memory of Taisi and her cat friends and family. (: just a thought ...hope u like it...
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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:03 pm

greywolf2468 wrote:
Taisi wrote:I typed it the night I found out... I couldn't sleep, so I wrote my feelings out.

I'm sorry for your loss. I think you should create a forum that takes cat donations in memory of Taisi and her cat friends and family. (: just a thought ...hope u like it...

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Re: What do you think?

Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:15 pm

:( Ignore the mean people who say you shouldn't bother, its what you believe in, and that is an amazing peice of writing, Seriously! And im a adult!
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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:23 pm

♥horselovesgirl♥ wrote::( Ignore the mean people who say you shouldn't bother, its what you believe in, and that is an amazing peice of writing, Seriously! And im a adult!

Thanks... I wrote a persuasive about animals that are abandoned earlier...
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Re: What do you think?

Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:25 pm

No problem ;) It is what you believe in! No one can ever take your dreams away, Only you can do that; never stop believing in yourself, even if it seems impossible, nothing; is impossible!
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Re: What do you think?

Postby above_all_else » Wed Apr 25, 2012 7:48 am

1) It is really sad!
2)I do like it, but awesome as it is, it was still really sad!
3) You can't let one opinion get you down. If you love writing, keep going. You know what I say? You can only get better.
4) Never, EVER say anything bad about yourself and/or your writing. There are plenty of people in the world that are going to do that, and you can't let it get to you. If you can't even stand up for you writing, who will?

Taisi wrote:I guess my writing's just too terrible and everybody hates it...

5) I don't mean to sound harsh, but people don't like to see people saying stuff like that. It makes them uncomfortable, as though you're searching for pity, even if you aren't. That would make someone unwilling to comment, worrying about offending you if they have critique.
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