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What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:55 am

Taisi
Taisi was a wonderful cat. As a kitten, she was playful, smart, and sweet. When she turned 7, her world changed, her friend, Patches, another calico, died. She and her sister, Taffi, grieved over the loss and would constantly meow at the door and wouldn’t eat for two days strait. They missed their friend.
When she turned 16, it was even worse. Taffi had become old, sick, and wouldn’t eat. She had given up life. She was taken to the vets and “put to sleep”. Taisi was miserable. After Taffi died, my grandparents’, Taisi, Taffi, and Patches’s owners, got a Tabby Mix cat. They named her Candie. Well, I did anyway.
On March 16, 2011, Taisi stopped eating and drinking. She was dying. Slowly, painfully, hopelessly dying. My grandma hoped that she would just stop breathing at home. She wanted her to die at home, the place she had lived all her life. But, she didn’t. She couldn’t. She wouldn’t.
On March 17, 2011, life for her became worse. She couldn’t walk. She couldn’t breathe. She was taken to the vets, who said that she had a stroke on March 16. They tried to give her the shot that would put her to sleep, but her veins had died, and she couldn’t let the liquid get to her heart, so they had to send my grandparents out of the room while they killed her, by hand. She weighed a measly four lbs. when she was killed.
The vets said that her heart was strong and that she was a fighter. She didn’t want to give up on life. She was strong and brave, it was just sad that she had to die, without the people she had lived with all of her life. Without her mom and dad. Without hope and life. Without a hand to pet her through her last breaths of life.
Taisi will forever be missed and loved. Taisi, Patches, and Taffi will be waiting up in heaven together, for us. I didn’t want her to die, but she’s in a better place now. She was old, sick, and weak. She was suffering and knew that her time in this world was up. She was ready to be with her sister and best friend again. She will always be with us, in our hearts. Long live Taisi, the best calico cat in the world.
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R.I.P Taisi. March 17, 2011.
May we meet again one day.
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Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:58 am

OMG!! Thats soooooo sad :'( Made me cry.
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Postby Taisi » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:59 am

I typed it the night I found out... I couldn't sleep, so I wrote my feelings out.
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Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:04 am

:( R.I.P Taisi
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Postby Taisi » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:05 am

:'(
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Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:09 am

Poor Dandaloo and Spud XD on the rp LOL


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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:10 am

Yep...

And I hope so... :(
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Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:11 am

:(
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Postby ♥horselovesgirl♥ » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:14 am

can you please post on Prints of a stead XD LOL
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Re: What do you think?

Postby Taisi » Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:19 am

I put up a poll
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