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Postby IT is Leaving » Sun Apr 22, 2012 1:29 am

Charaters

Sapphire Swirl- A dark purple unicorn mare with Light and normal yellow scruffy mane and tail, she has red eyes and her cutie mark is a blueish sapphire that looks like as if it has swirls on it

Spring Blossem- A dark redish pink Winged unicorn mare with mint wavy mane, she has dark lavender eyes and her cutie mark is a yellow Tulip.

Starlight Aura- A raspberry coloured unicorn mare with bright mint and pink swirlish mane and tail, she has blue eyes and her cutie mark is a falling star.

Night Sun- A dark grey Pegasus young mare with soft yellow mane, she has purple eyes and is yet to get her cutie mark (Blank Flank).

Light Glass- A light pink young earth pony mare with white and bright blue mane, she has orange eyes and is yet to get her cutie mark (Blank Flank), she is Sapphire Swirl's youngest sister.

I won't put 5 the main 6 and princesses untill chapter 1 or 2.

Charaters that appears from MLP: FIM series: Twilight Sparkle and Spike

Introduction

A unicorn appeared with finished Jewellery, she is dark purple with light and normal yellow scruffy like mane and red eyes, she said "order number 17 finished, who was order 17", a earth pony appeared and said "I was order 17, sorry i was late because I was at the library reading a book", she sighed and said "heres your order, I designed what you needed", she used the magic of her horn to put it on the customer and replyed "thanks for designing the necklace for me, that looks like the one I was asking for" she said "your welcome, thanks for ordering", the earth pony left feeling pleased. Her parents appeared saying "Sap", Sapphire Swirl replyed "yes, mum and dad, I got another happy customer", her mum said "your going to see Princess Celestia", she ask "why I am going to see her", her dad replyed "its really important, your going to ponyville". She was suprised "umm, mum and dad is my sister coming along", her mum replyed "Sap, your sister is coming along with you as well, so that you can make new friends", a earth pony appeared she was smaller than her but she was bright pink with white and light blue mane she smiled at her sister and said "Sapphire, could we pack up so that we can get ready", she replyed "of cause Lighty, but don't over sleep sis", Light Glass replyed "Ofcause I will sis".

In Ponyville lives earth ponies and Unicorns of all kinds, Pegasus live is Cloudsdale, but in a normal home lives a winged unicorn she is a smaller than other of her kind, she was dark redish pink, with Wavy mint mane she used her magic to water the plants when a pegasus and a unicorn appeared the pegasus was dark grey with soft yellow mane and the unicorn was raspberry coloured with bright mint and pink swirlish mane, she ask "Nighty and Starlight what brings you here", then Starlight Aura said "Night Sun tried to get her cutie mark by reading books but she failed to get it", she replyed "keep trying and your get one in no time", Night Sun said "Spring a lot of fillies and colts keep picking on me laughing that I am a blank flank", she replyed "don't let them get on your nerves ok nighty", she nodded and Starlight said "we will be going now bye Spring", they left and she replyed "bye you 2, now I can water the fruit so that they can be eaten later on", she water the strawberries, Blackberries and all sorts or fruit before going upstairs and read a book.

Night Sun and Starlight Aura trotted back to Artzan Grove which is Starlight's home where Starlight used her magic of the horn to put the sign which said 'open, come in anypony' and put it on the peg above the door, she got paper and some pens to take customer order, a unicorn appeared along with a baby dragon, Starlight Aura said "afternoon Twilight, what brings you here", she replyed "I would like to get some quills please?" she said "certainly, I won't take too long", Starlight used magic from her horn to bring in 6 feather quills and put it in Twilight's bag, she replyed "thanks Starlight for the feather quills, now I will write to princess Celestia", with that she and Spike left after that Night Sun appeared feeling sad saying "Starlight still no cutie mark for me", she replyed "don't worry you will get it someday".

End of introduction.
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Re: Sapphire's Story (MLP: FIM Fan Fic) | Comments Open

Postby IT is Leaving » Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:49 pm

The rest of the introduction has been typed and comments are open.


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