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The Falling of the wise Men~Read if you want to

Postby Kannin77 » Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:04 pm

The Falling of the Wise Men

a mystery I started writeing for school....I desided to share it with CS so....ya here is is I am of corse not finished







Prologue-
“Helro I am Kayoto Subaru and I have just heard some of the worst
news in my entire existence”......


Kayoto looked up to see a person he didn’t know approaching . He stood up to greet the person,or fight him,having a fight with Magnus(a rich Danish man) soon before his death had triggered a lot of anger in the poor Danes family.So Kayoto had to keep his guard up.But seeing the look on that mans face told Kayoto something was wrong very wrong.The man stopped in front of Kayoto “I am sorry to bother you Mr.Subaru but Peter Hudges is dead...sorry for your loss...I know you two were close.”The man said bowing in respect to the Japanese man before him.Kayotos jaw dropped no.No.No. This was not possible. His best friend.Gone. “W-w-welr... thank you for your kindness in telling me....it means arot” Kayoto stammered shaking.”May I ask how he died?”he asked a little more able to talk with some effort on his part.The man frowned “he was killed,Mr.Subaru”he said with a frown and walked off leaving Kayoto. To grieve.
Kayoto watched the man leave.Killed?.........No.The man meant murdered....Peter Hudges was murdered.Kayoto fell to his knees.He was in Tokyo,Japan.Next to his house.Under a Cherry Blossom tree.He fell to his knees.He felt like the world shook.with its own sobs for Peter was a good man.Peter was Kayoto’s only friend...Peter was like a brother.But now His brother was gone...






Chapter one

There aint no rest for the grieveing


A few weeks after Peter’s death Kayoto wasn’t any better than before.He was now sitting under the Cherry Blossom tree again eyes closed thinking.Why did this happen?Who killed him?When will I feel good enough to leave this house? He thought about these things alot now-a-days.Kayoto sighed hearing something he looked up eyes red from crying still shaking slightly at the thought of death and with the sobs that had grown silent the tears that would no longer come.In the distance came a young man,a old friend of the Subaru family,he walked up to Kayoto and sat next to him,the mans name was Maxx.Kayoto nodded a greeting forceing a smile on his face no matter how fake it was “Kon’nichiwa,Maxx”he murmered glad he reamemberd the mans name.Maxx dident smile “hello mon ami”the French-Canadian said with his usual cold tone.”How are you?”he asked although it was clear Kayoto wasn’t okay.Kayoto sighed “hai,I’m fine...”he huffed.Maxx shrugged “were you close to Peter?”he asked,Kayoto nodded “hai”was all he said.”Personally,I never knew Peter.....but I herd he was nice,no?”Maxx asked and Kayoto answerd “yes he was a nice guy...” he sighed.

Peter like Kayoto had been very rich each of their families owned major companies and each of them were never mean nor greedy,they always found it best to help out in the world.

At one point in time,Peter lived at Kayoto’s house in Japan, due to company matters, that’s how he and Kayoto became such close friends....only to be lost when the other was gone.

Maxx looked at Kayoto “um....dude.....you okay?”he asked,the Jap had been very quiet and looked as if possessed.Kayoto looked up “yes...I think you should go now Maxx......”he said shifting his gaze from the man to look at the blossoms of the tree.Maxx took the hint getting up he walked off humming the tune of Animal I have become as he walked off.

Kayoto sighed he looked up suddenly.........something was wrong.......what was it? Suddenly a figure jumped from behind a nearby bush tackling Kayoto to the ground,Kayoto looked up into blue eyes,face hidden by the mask the person wore,he didn’t scream,nor struggle.He just looked up into the bright blue eyes........now knowing he was looking into the eyes of his death.....and he welcomed it......if it was meant to be it was meant to be. The odd thing was........Kayoto knew this person had not killed Peter....this was someone entirly diffrent....he just knew..But that didn’t mean this person wasn’t involved....this person knew something.....just by the look in that icy stare.....he could see a hint of knowing............but what?.......What did this person know......That led them here to kill him?.......It was to be not answered....not to Kayoto anyway as these thoughts passed through Kayoto’s head.....these few moments of thought........he was soon shot dead............No more Kayoto.............and the second Wise Man.......was dead.
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Re: The Falling of the wise Men~Read if you want to

Postby Kannin77 » Fri Apr 27, 2012 9:23 am

Chapter Two

Two Down Six to Go



Across the ocean in America a little Latvian boy named Vilhelm his name meaning 'Will desire' he was sitting on a park bench thinking he had read in the papers of a killing streak in Europe and Asia.......He was glad he moved to America it seemed they were killing the rich and wealthy and that was what Vilhelm was......rich....he was an only child and was adopted by a Russian named Anna when his mother died in a car accident.......Vilhelm never knew the two named Peter and Kayoto.......he really didn’t care....but he knew that they were of wealthy families and that’s probably why they were killed....that’s what he inferred anyway.Vilhelm’s friends.No.Close adopted relatives called him Vill,or Will depending on if they were American or Russian due to the fact Vilhelm wasn’t the easiest name to pronounce.

As the day passed Vilhelm was walking in the town of Del Norte, Colorado trudging through the snow...here in the San Luis valley the snow piled up alot but it wasn’t as cold as the mountains so he couldn’t complain he walked into a nearby restaurant called Boogies sitting down he reached into his pocket pulling out twenty dollars and waited for the waitress......Vilhelm was about fourteen years of age the youngest of his family well adopted family,seeing as his real family no longer existed...Making him the richest child alive.He sighed as the waitress asked him what he wanted he told her “just a water”he said staring forward with a emotionless gaze in truth he was kinda jumpy and skittish,but he didn’t like to show it
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