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Postby bellamy. » Sat Apr 21, 2012 11:46 am

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This is just a story i take dear to my heart. I hope you do not copy it, as it is something I will work on when I am feeling emotional, bored, you name it. I will not rush this story as I want it to be the best I have done. Please comment as I hope it will be awesome.

This is based around the time of the civil war, and will have some mild violence. Please be aware.-



Main Characters-

Owl Leroy-Age 16

Jackson Jonson-Age 18
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Re: -Noname Please Post. :3-

Postby bellamy. » Sat Apr 21, 2012 12:08 pm

Prolouge



"Well I recall his parting words"

"Papa!Papa! No!"
A young girl screams, her gold hair is in braids as she watches the men take her father up to the hangman's noose.She runs toward him, screaming as the guards grab her. She jerks their grips away hurredly, before being caught again.

"Must I accept his fate,Or take myself far from this place?"

But it's to late. The barrel is already removed, and her father is hanging from the rope. Tears stream from her face and she screams. She runs away,bawling. Her white dress is soaked in salty water, and her shoes are muddied from running through the small city. She dosen't look back at her father, he was merley killed for killing a man that tried to steal from him. He was framed.

"I thought I heard a black bell toll,A little bird did sing,"

The girl runs into the forest, her pale hands digging into the dirt as she climbs, upwards, and into the abyss. She stops when she's sure she's far enough, and sits, holding her knees to her chest, sobbing lightly.

-Man has no choice,When he wants every thing.-




Chapter One
Jacks
"Lord I'm sittin' on top of the world."

I grab my sixgun and stand, kicking dirt into my fire. If they were after me, they'd be here soon. I was wanted for murder. Yes, murder. I killed him because he stole my horse, and my girlfriend. I spit into the dirt, smiling wickedly. I could hear the sheriff, I can just hear him, I lecture he'll give me. I tip my hat back into shape, and run forward.

I had four bullets left. That should be enough until I had gotten far enough away. I held my hat as I slid down the hill, my boots scraping the dirt.
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Postby lucky15371 » Sat Apr 21, 2012 12:14 pm

that is good
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