Drowning...

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Drowning...

Postby porksugar » Fri Apr 20, 2012 1:48 pm

With your eyes closed,you fall deeper
Never wanted to feel like this,but it just happened
It hurts to think you were used,it truly does
But it hurts worse when you cant breathe and try all you want
The pain wont go away,thats when you realize that you are

Drowning...♥
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Re: Drowning...

Postby Svel » Sat Apr 21, 2012 12:17 am

Nice poem!
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An Irish Blessing wrote:
Always remember to forget
The troubles that passed away.
But never forget to remember
The blessings that come each day.

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Re: Drowning...

Postby porksugar » Sun Apr 22, 2012 5:19 am

Thank you! You should read my other one,Alon In The Dark
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