pirates! (finish this story) and comment please

[Losberry]

" AAAHH", tamberis screamed in frustration. she kicked and squirmed but there was no way these ropes were going to give way.
she was tied to the pole of the ship and was getting some funny looks from the rest of alcome's crew.

"shut up girly", a voice called from over head. then the sword came whizzing by and stuck into the side of the pole, almost hitting her in the head.

"what!", she screamed.

"you heard me", alcome said. "shut, up".

then there was a secong sword that stopped her from more shouting and complaining. but this one cut the rope and sent her flying at the ground...........

[elie53]

Real quick... I think it should say "the mast of the ship"... Not the pole of the ship :3 But aaaanyways...

I'd love to help out! <3 What role does the girl play in this story? Is she the princess type? Or is she epic and cool like the rest of the pirates? Why is she tied up in the first place? Were they taking her for money? Or because she did something against them? Were they going to kill her? Will there be any romance between her and one of the pirates?

Thank youuu~
Bryan Regan is amazing <3

[Losberry]

lol i know its the mast but i in hurry and its just a for fun! you can make an extra charactor or something..... just i wrote this and wanna let people be creative and finish it themselfs!!!!!!