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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 12:50 pm

Chaper 5 :d Cats yoeled "lets Attack" Silver star "oh and HeepPaw and SootPaw come to." -she jumped to the entrance "lets get going." The cats raced through the forest. WolfSky ran next to MurkyLeaf. They were close to Mapleclan camp. They lept into trees,they already could see cats gathering arounf there rock as he showed Owlkit. SiverStar hissed "RippleClan ATTACK" The cats streamed from the trees ramming into Mapleclan camp. Wolfsky went for the deputy he slashed his face and bit his leg.Cats hissed and yowled. Mouseblaze took on a 2 apprentices Lakepaw and Spiderpaw. WolfSky slashed CrippleFangs Face leaving big marks. Murkyleaf cornored Comet star and growled "Hand over the kit" Cometstar smiked as he slashed her face. Silverstar droped to the groud dead. Sootpaw screeched "NO... isis she dead" Silverstar stood up "its ok it wasnt my last life... we got to fall back NOW" Sootpaw stammered "but we havent saved Owlkit" Silverstar sighed " if there willing to take one of my own lives they will take any of your lives no doubt... RIPPLECLAN RETREAT!" cats started fighting and fleeeing. Murkyleaf kicked Cometsar in the gut then ran to her clan. In Camp cats asked "wheres Owlkit ? did you win" She told of defet "but we will have our revenge!"
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:44 pm

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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic -Chap 6

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Sat Apr 14, 2012 2:53 pm

Chapter 6 : WolfSKy nuzzled sparrowkit as he cooed "its ok owlkit will be fine they would never harm a kit i promise" Sparrowkit wimpered as he was nudged back into the nurury. He turned to Murkyleaf as she worried "what if they hurt him" wolfsky sighed but he knew what would most likely happen " if they were really that despret to get a kit they would harm him" The Gathering came . SIlverstar,SnowRift,WolfSky, Mouseblaze,WhiskerPaw,HeepPaw, PineHeart.Cederpaw,LilyFall,and WhiteSky. The 3 leaders sat on high rock. WolfSKy snarled at DarkBlaze of Mapleclan "you horrible kit theves." soon the leaders spoke. RunniningStar announced " Our clan has 2 new apprentices Riverpaw and SKyPaw. We also have a new warrior MoonPetal" Cometstar meowed "Mapleclan has a new kit his name is Owlkit" Silverstar jumped in and yowled "you only have the kit is becuse you STOLE HIM from Rippleclan" gasps rippled through the croud. Runningstar yowled you cant do that!' Cometstar snarled in his face "im a leader i can do what ever i want!" Blizzardstorm of runningstars clan yowled "KIT THEIF!" soon the gathering ended and The clans went home.
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Sun Apr 15, 2012 5:00 am

Chapter 7:
Silverstar the next day silverstar yowled "we will attack Mapleclan at there border!" -she sat tall- "the cats in this battle will be GooseFlight,RabbitNoes, Snowrift, Cederpaw,RainSpot,WolfSky ,SpeckledFrost,CrowNoes,me,Mouseblaze,and OakPaw" -she said - and heepPaw and Sootpaw you go with emberFlight and BrookCloud and get Owlkit" the cats yowled with joy. Soon the atrol set out to the border and marked past there border infront of a patrol. RiverBelly snarled " what In the name of starclan are you doing" she signaled her tail for TImberpaw to get more cats. Soon a battle patrol arived. Silverstar yowled "ATTACK!" Wolfsky leaped on the apprentice who was Brokenpaw slashing and clawing sending him flying. He watched the 4 cats go get his kit. He tackled Riverbelly and slashed her face . He bit into her sholder and slashed her face Soon a shreik came from where Mapleclan camp was as 3 of the 4 ran back with out Emberflight. Soon Comet star came carrying a limp body it was a golden pelt blood stainded it was Emberflight. Silverstar screeched RETREAT. Our clan ran back to our side. She announced to the clan what happened.We all mourned her. Silverstar stood tall and meowed. "If we are to save owlkit we will need backup tomorrow we will send i CloudBerry and his apprentice Shadowpaw and ask for back up"
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby DreamCaster » Sun Apr 15, 2012 5:39 am

Quote:'Cometstar snarled in his face "im a leader i can do what ever i want!'.
What a bad leader *screams*KITTHEIF!
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Sun Apr 15, 2012 6:49 am

He is a bad leader but dont worry he wont last for ever XD.

CHapter 8:
The next day... Wolfsky ,Silverstar decided to try again and fight Maple clan again befoe asking NightClan for help. He And the first battle patrol left for Mapleclan camp. The second and third patrol followed. Murkyleaf,the deputy,Cougerpaw and 4 more warriors guarded camp. His patrol barged in camp attackig the first cat he saw. He swung his tired paw at there face. The Cat Smacked him across camp .Batttle raged on then the second patrol came. Soon the battle endes and there is a winner. Mapleclan still stands strong Rippleclan has again been defeated. Theclan sent the medican cats and leader to Night clan. When they came back silverstar yowled " Runningstar agreed to help us defeat Mapleclan and Get owlkit back!".
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Tue Apr 24, 2012 1:24 pm

Chapter 9:

2 days letter 3 patrols lined up both made up of both NightClan and MapleClan . WolfSky stood beside Darkthroat of night clan his dark pelt was puffed up. he and the patrol ran forward he looked back at the camp cats guarded heavily ears pricked inccase we needed back up. The first patrol made up of Me, Runningstar,Whitethroat, Snowrift,My apprentice Cederpaw,Lunarheart,her apprentice,Brightpaw and Pinerift. We charged into the camp. I plunged my self onto the tom who had tooken owlkit slashing his face. the first patrol out numbered the second patrolcame . His claws shrededed up the toms chest sending him flying. He bounded to the nursuy with his brother slashing every cat in our way. We broke into the nursury we knew only to take whatwas ours. i dove to owlkit who was sleeping in a nest he picked his son up bounding out of the nusury owlkit squeaked"daddy you rescused me" He smiled "i wouldnt leave you" his clan and night clan saw he had Owlkit and bounded out of camp . Both clans sat in rippleclan camp Runningstar spoke "it is time for our clan to return back if you ever need our help again just ask" Silverstar dipped her head as they left. That night Silverstar yowled "let all cats old enough to catch there own prey join before star rock for a clan meeting" every cat joined. she called bearkit,tallkit,moonkit,sparrowkit,and owlkit to the rock and begun ' bearkit from this day you will be Bearpaw your mentor Gooseflight .Tallkit from this day you will be Tallpaw i Snowrift will mentor you, Moonkit you will be Moonpaw i will mentor you ,sparrowkit you will be sparrowpaw Mouseblaze will mentor you. Owlkit you will be Owlpaw CrabFur will mentor you'
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