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The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:48 pm

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battle raged in mapleclan camp. the large brute dog and and the other dog had made there way to mapleclan camp. Honeystar watched as her warriors fought with there lives. claws slashed the cats . Honeystar jumped out of battle almost defeted. loosing a life she fell to the ground. she woke up moments later on her last life. Her battole wounds gone. she turned around to where one dog shook off cats it seemed to be going for.... starclan no! my mate ! She bounded forward she sliceed the muzzle of the dog then comp!. The dog had her grasped in his jaws it had her by the neck and shook. Life flooded away as she was tossed to the ground dead. the deputy SwiftSong screeched the alpha dog was chasing her. She lept on its muzzle clawing andbiting. The dog shook her off in the small stream next to camp where every one thought she drowned. Then like a flash they thought the clan as they knew it would be gone forever. then 2 mystrys toms jumped in and slash the dogs eyes sending them fleeing. The medican cat BrambleFlight ran over thanking and yowling its a sign the new leader. His name was Cato and his brother Thrush... What will happen now!
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Thu Apr 12, 2012 12:22 pm

Chapter 1:

Wolfsky sat in Rippleclan camp he watched as dawn slowly came his paws ached and his eyes barly open. He sat with MouseBlaze his brother. Soon snowRift the clan deputy appreared from the warriors den she meowed her bluegrey fur blowing as she meowed "your vigil is now over. Go rest up." she made her way to the fresh killpile. Wolfsky let out a loud yawn his eyes blinked repeatedly as he and his brother made there way to the warriors den. they slept for half a day. He flicked his ears as he heared bad tempered snowrift growled at a cat " Fine take who ever you want on patrol why should i care!" cats stared blankly. He crurled up closer into his nest then a growl woke him "get up you to you scheduled to go on hunting patrol and dont forget you two are going to the gathering!" she walked out her head high and her tail swishing. wolfSky got up and padded to the freshkill pile picking up a water vole and layed down to eat. He stood up and padded to the entrance waiting for MoonBreeze and MurkyLeaf. They walked throught the dense forest this was his first hunt as a warrior he felt proud .he chased a rabbit as he snapped its neck he heard a screech. he dropped the rabbit bounding twords the sound he skidded to a stop there was Murkyleaf fighting some rouge. The rouge threw her at a tree. he didnt stop to think for a second he luanched himself on the rr ouge clawing and biting. He was tossed off the tom hissed as he looked at the sky "i have no time for this .. i will get you" -he lept into the trees disapearing about to go after hi murkyLeaf comanded "stop we should just get back to camp"
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:11 am

Any One Like this ?
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:16 am

Nyu<3 wrote:Any One Like this ?
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby DreamCaster » Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:23 am

This is...AWSEM!
More please.:)
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:47 am

:3 Thanks so much for letting me know u like this i have the next chapter planned out ;D


Chapter 2:
WolfSky smiled at MurkyLeaf as he ate his mouse she was really beautiful her sandy fur color that makes her green eyes shine. He gulped down the rest of the mouse as Snowrift meowed " Wolfsky its time for the gathering come on." The choosen cats waited at the entrance he walked over there he smiled at little Icepaw and Crowpaw . icepaw was almost jumping with excitement "I wonder what the other clans are like? how many could there be!" Crowpaw chuckled "i forgot isnt this your first gathering. So stick by me and dont worry there not as scary as they look" Silverstar stood in the entrance as she flicked her tail and started walking. He walked out of the camp his eyes flickered as they passed through the forest then he looked back to Icepaw who was looking so goofy she was bouncing forward till GooseFlight meowed "Icepaw stop bouncing your gonna look like a fool when the clan sees you do you want to look like a fool at your first gathering" his amber eyes glowed. Icepaw slunk down and started walking. They Came to the 3 trees. Gasps rippled from his clan "wheres Honeystar?" Brackenbreeze the elder rasped"i see Mapleclan warriors but i dont see Honeystar!" Briarheart gasped "i dont see SwiftSong eaither!" The Clan sat down. Silverstar jumped up to Running Rock next to Runningstar who sat on a low hanging branch. MouseBlaze mumbled to him " the MapleClan warriors dont look in shape to be here . just look at Ravenwing he looks as if he shouldnt be out of the medican cat den!" Silverstar meowed "will Honeystar or Swiftsong come to High rock!" There was no sign of either cat then a young she-cat named RiverBelly stood up "i shall represent my clan" Runningstar growled bitterly " Why should you represent it should be the leader or deputy or at least a exsperinced warrior!" She growled "Im the most exsperinced here " Runningstar smirked "so your saying your clan is weak" She just let out a snarl . Silverstar stood between them "let us ust beguin " Runningstar growled bitterly "all i have to say is we have a new warrior his name is BumbleHeart" Silver star meowed "we to have new warriors thoose are MouseBlaze and WolfSky' Riverbelly snapped "may i speak now?" both other leaders nodded . Riverbelly stood in front " two nights ago Maple Clan Has been attacked my a pack of dogs! And in battle Both HoneyStar and SwiftSong were killed. but we were saved By a rouge who has been called Cato. Cato agreed to change his name to Comet and take on the name CometStar . Tonighte he travles to Mooncave to recive nine lives' Gaps rippeld through the croud. Runninstar snarled . Silverstar still shocked " The gathering is over!"
The clan left the gathering and returned home.
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby DreamCaster » Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:59 am

Poor Honeystar and Swiftsong :( they will be remebered.
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 10:11 am

they will be rembered .

Chapter 3:
Wolfsky walked along the border with RabbitNoes and Crowpaw.WolfSky sniffed the air and ground to see if any one crossed the border "MapleClan must of just marked the border the scent is fresh." Icepaw mewed . Wolfspirt rubbed himself on the bush that was part of the border. Crowpaw and Rabbitneos did the same on difent part of the border. Wolfspirt joined them as they walked back to camp. He looked twords MurkyLeaf who had just came in carrying a plump rabbit and smiled.


(chapter 4 is gonna be longer)
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Fri Apr 13, 2012 11:21 am

CHAPTER 4:
4 moons later...
Wolfsky padded to the freshkill pile grabbing a plump mouse for MurkyLeaf she had given birth to his 2 kits Owlkit and SparrowKit they had been born only a moon earlier. He sat next to murkyleaf as he watchedhis his kits attack the moss ball chasing it around the nursury with Moonkit,BearKit , and Tallkit. MoonKit and TallKit were the kits of Silverstar they were 5 moons.Bearkit belonged to IceNoes.WolfSky padded back to the warriors den he started chatting with MouseBlaze " its such a bueatiful Greenleaf day ! I bet theres lots of prey out!"
Suddehnly CrowFlight ran in he ran to the nusury yowling " Mapleclan warriors are coming Mapleclanwarriors are comming!" Silverstar ran out of the den and growled "fetch the other patrols! who is left in camp? if you are here come to the clearing" Me and my brother came both other queens ,SnowRift and RabbitNoes. Then a group of cats Cometstar smirked "well well well i never would of thought your clan to be so open and defensless. You know what to do MapleClan ATTACK!" Cats jumped at us. WolfSky tackled a tom who was runnin to the nursury he slashed him across the face. the two tumbled he slashed and hissed biting. IceNoes was busy fighting the 2 apprentices Shadepaw and BarkPaw. Murkyleaf walked back and forth in front of the entrance. Then A Large Browntom charged his way in the nursury grabbing OwlKit and SparrowKit MurkyLeaf yowled and threw her self on him biting and clawing, He hissed "if you still wanna be able to use your paws LET GO." she growled and slashed her paw on his sholder as he dropped Sparrowkit. The mapleclan warriors fled. MurkyLeaf wailed "they stole Owlkit!" The other patrols from there clan returned. Silverstar jumped on SKy rocks and yowled " every one join now theres no time!" She exsplained what happened. Cats Yowled "KIT THEVES". SilverStar yowled "we will attack and bring him back! The cats Coming will be SnowRift,WolfSKy,MurkyLeaf,BrackenSnarl,CrowFlight,BirchSky,Flyfeather, MouseBlaze, and RabbitScar"
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Re: The clans in the dusk- warrior fan fic

Postby DreamCaster » Fri Apr 13, 2012 12:14 pm

Oh no OWLKIT!
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