What is Love

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What is Love

Postby Toxicide » Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:24 am

Love:
Love is a tough feeling,
Love kills from the inside out.
Love you can show.
You may even find it.
The sight of love is repulsing or even Sweet,
Love you can feel.
Love is not red,
For it is black,
black as the night,
with no moon in sight.
Love is tough.


ORIGNAL:
Love
Love is a tough feeling,
Love kills from the inside out.
Love you can show.
Love you can find.
Love you can see.
Love you can feel.
Love is not red,
Love is black,
black as the night,
with no moon in sight.
Love is tough.


My own work, please do not steal.
Comments or critisisms welcome.
(Sorry If there is any misspelled words, I'm horrible at spelling.)
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Re: What is Love

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Thu Apr 12, 2012 10:16 am

love is evil...
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"I didn't know that I could still feel love... It gives me hope... "
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Re: What is Love

Postby Toxicide » Fri Apr 13, 2012 11:13 am

haha so dark I love your responce
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Re: What is Love

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Fri Apr 13, 2012 11:35 am

well, it's true.
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Re: What is Love

Postby Toxicide » Fri Apr 13, 2012 11:47 am

it is. I actually have more poems when I find them I will post them and let you know.
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Re: What is Love

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Fri Apr 13, 2012 11:57 am

ok, cool!
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