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SkyClan (new)

Postby phyliss99 » Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:36 am

Skyclan

The Brave, Loyal and Protective




Cats:

Leader:
Swampstar- muddy color she-cat with bright yellow eyes

Deputy:
Sunstep- orange tabby tom with white paws and underbelly

Medicine Cat:
Brambleberry- calico she-cat with green eyes

Warriors:
Yellowbelly- white tom with yellowish underbelly
Reefheart- blue/grey she-cat with darker stripes
Bluemoon - blue/grey tom with white paws
Talonfeather- light brown she-cat with white underbelly
Ashfur- grey tom
Lionblaze- yellow tom with darker stripes
Firebird- dark orange tom
Longtail- black tom with long tail and white paws
Darkfeather- black she-cat with silky fur

Apprintices:
Fatherpaw- silver/grey she-cat
Silverpaw- silver/grey she-cat with sleek fur
Dovepaw - grey she-cat with hints of silver
Thornpaw- dark brown tom with flecks of black
Adderpaw- light brown almost white tom

Queens:
Frostheart- white she-cat (Thistlekit- dark brown tom)
Redtail- Rusty colored she-cat (Brownkit- brown tom; Splashkit- silver and white she-cat)

Elders:
Toadstep- black tom with brown spots
Goldenpine- golden brown she-cat

Chapter one will come soon.
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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby Annabethe4 » Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:39 am

Cool. :) Can't wait. ;)
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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby phyliss99 » Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:29 am

Chapter 1

Swampstar yawned as she stretched in her den. It was a large hole in the ground in the middle of a large forest area. The warrior's den, Nursery, Elders Den, Medicine Den and the Apprintices Den we five trees to the right. Standing up she padded outside her den, which was located on a hill. The cats from her clan, SkyClan, were lined up infront of her den about thirty tail lengths away. "Hunting Patrol, Yellowbelly take Longtail and Darkfeather to the east near Oak of Regret. Talonfeather take your apprintice, Featherpaw, Firebird and his apprintice Silverpaw to the west." She paused and watched the seven cats leave. "We need a few cats to fix the nursery and apprintice den. Ashfur and your apprintice, Dovepaw, and Berryslash will help fix them. Reefheart,Thornpaw, and Bluemoon with do boarder patrol, CloudClan and SnowClan borders. Sunstep and his apprintice Adderpaw, and Lionblaze can check RiverClans border." she meowed boldly. After the cats left she walked up to the elders den. "Mother? Father?" she mewed.
"Yes dear?" her mother, Goldenpine, mewed.
Toadstep, her father, looked at her grumpily. He'd never liked her and now he was sick and about to die.
"I wanted to check how father was doing but he's clearly not going to talk." she mewed alittle bit irratated. She sat down by her mother and layed down. "Has it gotten worse?" she asked Goldenpine.
"Yes it has. I over heard Brambleberry muttering to herself about him living a few more moons. But that was one moon ago..." she mewed.
"Well, okay. I'll talk to Berrysplash. By dad." she meowed and licked her dads head gentaly. But he grunted and she left irratated and tail twitching.
Swampstar walked past Ashfur and saw his fixing patrol had already patched the elders den before she even got there. "Your doing great," she mewed then looked at her plump stumach, luckily no one noticed but mabey they thought she was just fat? Eating too much. Mushroomkit, Gingerkit, Flowerkit and Poppykit. she thought. Brambleberry already said there would be four but the runt may not make it. She hoped for the best. Walking to the Fresh Kill pile she saw that there was only a vole left. Lionblaze doesn't even know I am having his kits... it was an accident thats all it was. He has a mate but his mate doesn't want kits. she thought. Taking the vole for her kits she ate it, hoping it would please them. Walking to the MEdicine cat den she saw Brambleberry organizing herbs. "Brambleberry," she began.
The young she-cat jumped. "You scared me Swampstar! Oh, yes what is it?"
"Kits..." she mewed and she saw Brambleberry nod. Laying down she sighed. "I need to know if they may be more kits instead of four." She closed her eyes as she felt a small kit kick. "I have felt two new paws but I'm unsure if one may have two deformed paws."
Brambleberry sighed and felt her stumach. I do feel something, but it may be a runt and the other kit may just be small in size. The other paw, I belive a kit will have a deformed paw. You better start naming, they'll be born soon... has anyone asked about why you've gotten so big?"
Swampstar shook her head. "No ones asked yet." she mewed. Releif flodded through her when Brambleberry confirmed the two kicks. "I have the names, Mushroomkit, Gingerkit, Flowerkit and Poppykit but I need the last one." she mewed.
Brambleberry looked up. "What about Blazekit?" she mewed quietly.
"What was that?" Swampstar meowed suddenly intereste in the name she thought she heard.
"Blazekit."
Swampstar purred. "Excelent. I'll announce to the clan I'mm having kits in one moon."
Brambleberry shook her head. "You don't understand, they are going to be born within afew sunrises."
Swampstar stood up, knocking Brambleberry down. "I'm sorry about that." she mewed helping the shocked she-cat to her paws. "I thought you said two moons last moon high?"
Brambleberry shook her head. "I was wrong. Your farther along than I thought. About two sunrises."
"But that's when Thistlekit is becoming an apprintice. I'll be too weak!" she meowed suprised.
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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby phyliss99 » Thu Apr 12, 2012 9:46 am

Chapter 2


Sunstep walked with his apprintice, Adderpaw, and Lionblaze towards RiverClan's border. The sneaky clan cats had been hunting on their territory and stealing the prey. "Shhh." he hissed quietly lifting his tail, signaling the cats to stop. "Bushberry, Riversplash and Snowpelt are at it again!" he pauesd and nodded. "Attack!" he yowled. Leaping at the cats and landing on Bushberry. The she-cat yowled and squirmed under his paws. He ducked as Riversplash and Snowpelt lept at him, they hit heads and fell to the ground stunned. That gave Adderpaw and Lionblaze time to pin them down.
"Get off!" Snowpelt hissed, she was two moons older then Adderpaw and had just become a warrior but she was smaller than the apprintice.
Sunstep looked at Lionblaze holding down Riversplash. "You Frog-Brains, always looseing. A kit would know better than jumping at be from oppisite directions. This happens everytime." he meowed with a smirk. Unsleathing his claws he pushed his paw to Bushberry's neck and pressed down, blood began to flow. "Do you promise not tocome here anymore?" he growled.
The she-cat squirmed in pain and fear. "Y-Yes." she squeaked.
He got off and she darted into RiverClan's territory. He looked at the others and they got off. The two cats darted after their clanmate.
"And stay there!" schreeched Adderpaw.
Sunstep shook his head with a smile and looked at Lionblaze. "Good pin." he meowed turning to Adderpaw. "Good comeback." he purred. "We'd better go." he meowed. Walking back to camp they stopped at the Minnow Stream and took a drink. They saw the second hunting patrol with Talonfeather, Featherpaw, Firebird and Silverpaw, fishing for carp and cat fish. Odd... witch cat started calling them cat fish? I wonder. I guess because of their whiskers. he thought.
"We should get something to eat before the Games." Lionblaze meowed from behind Sunstep.
Sunstep jumped and fell in the stream. He stood up chuckling and shaking his pelt. "Good idea." he mewed with a smile. His patrol went back to camp and they got a shrew to share. The each ate alittle and rested in the sun. "Hello Swampstar." he meowed seeing her. Standing up he walked away from Adderpaw and Lionblaze. "I've noticed you've been tired lately... is everything alright?"
"Just tired. I'm stressed because of my father also though. It's getting worse." Swampstar meowed with a sigh.
Sunstep understood and nodded. "There's nothing else?" he pressed on.
"Can you keep a secret?" she asked.
He nodded with intrest. "I swear to StarClan." he meowed solemly.
Swampstar sighed. "I'm haveing Lionblaze's kits." she meowed.
Sunstep starred in suprise. "Have you told him? How many?" he asked carefully.
Swampstar shooked her head. She looked depressed. "I haven't told him and Brambleberry thinks five or six. "It was an accident... you beleive me right."
Sunstep shook his head snapping back into reality.
"No?"
"Yes! Yes, I beleive you. I was thinking of names." he meowed. Sunstep sat down with Swampstar inside her den where they could talk in private.
"I have names already. Mushroomkit, Gingerkit, Flowerkit, Poppykit and Blazekit after Lionblaze. Brambleberry chose it." she meowed with a purr.
Sunstep purred. "Those are wonderful names. Frostheart let me choose Thistlekit's name. They're the best thing that ever happened to me, other than becomeing deputy of corse. So have you chose the warrior that are particapating in the Games?" he aksed.
Swampstar nodded. "You, Lionblaze, Darkfeather, Longtail, Yellowbelly and Ashfur." she mewed.
"Your not particatpating?" he asked, you always do. How will we win speed?" he asked in suprise.
Swampstar shook her head. "I'm too far into my pregnacy and that's whey Lionblaze is in it this year." she meowed.
Sunstep nodded. "That's good. I'll be in the warriors den if you need me." he meowed walking out of the den and into the warriors den, ready to sleep.
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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby Lena. » Thu Apr 12, 2012 10:27 am

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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby phyliss99 » Thu Apr 12, 2012 11:22 am

((Thanks :) The 3rd chapter comes tomorrow :D))
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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby Lena. » Thu Apr 12, 2012 11:43 am

phyliss99 wrote:((Thanks :) The 3rd chapter comes tomorrow :D))

cant wait! :D :D
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Re: SkyClan (new)

Postby phyliss99 » Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:11 am

Chapter 3

Brambleberry sat in the medicine den sorting herbs. "I hear you Thistlekit." she meowed and turned around. The small brown spikey kit stood right behind her.
"I can never scare you!" he squeaked.
Brambleberry purred. "Can you get me some Horsetail from behind the nursery? You know about that patch right?" she mewed looked at him. Whatching him not and scamper off she turned around and soaked some cobweb in some water to clean it. Putting that down she looked at her cut on her pad. It was almost infected and it stung. She chewed up some marigold, it was a fowl taste but when she placed it on the cut it soothed the stinging and slowed it down.
"I'm back!" Thistlekit squeaked, it was a muffeled sound because of the big wad of Horsetail that hung in his mouth and tucked under his chin.
Brambleberry jumped, twice! Twice she'd been scared today. "Exceltent. Chew it up and mix it with some chewed Marigold. It's an experiment to see if it heals wounds and keepsit from getting infected any faster." she mewed and watched him do so. "Thistlekit," she began.
The kit looked up. "Yes?" he asked.
"Do you want to be my apprintice when you become an apprintice?" she asked, cleaning her front paws in the small puddle in her den.
"Yes!Yes! YEs!" he squeaked.
Brambleberry purred. "Great, I tell Swampstar..." she paused and stood up. "I'll be right back." she mewed. Walking to Swampstar's den she stopped and sat down by the pretty leader.
"Yes?"
"I've found an apprintice. Thistlekit show's good potentil in Medicine Handling." she meowed hoping Swampstar would approve.
"Sunstep told me sevral moons ago Thistlekit was to be a warrior. I'll talk to Sunstep for you." the leader meowe dnad walked away.
Brambleberry nodded her thanks. Walking back to Thistlekit his ears pricked.
"What did she say?" he mewed excitedly.
Brambleberry looked at him. "Your father wants you to be a warrior so Swampstar is going to talk to him about letting you be my apprintice." she mewed.
"Oh."
"Sorry."
"It's fine, I'll talk to him." Thistlekit mewed scampering towards his father.
Brambleberry purred and turned around. She walked to the very back of the den where a small tunnel takes her to her nest.
A sound echoed from the cave.
She walked forward carefuly. She hissed and about twenty bats came flying out. She fell backwards and breathed in the toxic are from the bats dung. She began to feel light headed she ran out of the tunnel and saw a blurry Thistlekit sitting infront of her. "Help." she wheezed.
"Brambleberry!" he gasped and got wet moss and let her drink. Thistlekit grabbed some herbs that she couldnt reconize because of the haze she was in.

A day later Brambleberry was back to normal. She nudged Thistlekit. "Thankyou so much!" she meowed.
"Your welcome. I better go. Daddy is taking me to see the territory soon." he mewd and ran off.
She purred and layed down in her new nest. Dosing off into a light sleep she lay in the comfy nest.
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Re: SkyClan (new)

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