The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

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The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

Postby obsolete dream » Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:11 am

I'm done! I'm going to start on chapter one.
Now you may comment!
Clans

-Moonclan. The cats live on a moor like windclan. They are much like Windclan.
-Planetclan.These cats live like Riverclan
CATS OF THE CLANS

Moonclan

LEADER
Moonstar- A grey she-cat with a white patch on her forehead. Her eyes are blue.She is on her second life.(#8)
Deputy
Whitewind-a white tom with a ripped ear and a black tail tip.
Warriors
Shadowclaw-a newly named black tom warrior. The top of his ears, his paws, and his tail tip are white.Eyes are amber.
Shadeheart-A shy she-cat. She is grey with white paws. Sister of Moonstar.Light blue eyes. Apprentice- Brownpaw
Redwing-A orangey-red tom with a white wing shape on the top of his head.Eyes are amber.Apprentice-Cloudpaw
Darkstream-A newly named she-cat.She is a black tabby with light green eyes.
Yellowclaw-A yellow and white tom. Apprentice-Firepaw
Goldenheart-A yellow tabby she-cat. Apprentice-Windpaw
Medicine cat
Silverheart-A silver she-cat with bright blue eyes.Med cat apprentice-Violetpaw
Apprentices
Brownpaw-a light brown she-cat with dark brown on her ear, her two front paws, and her tail tip.Her eyes are light green.
Cloudpaw- A black and white tom with amber eyes.
Firepaw-a tortoiseshell she cat with bright blue eyes.
Windpaw- A grey she-cat with white paws.
Medicine cat apprentice
Violetpaw- An eager black she-cat with blue eyes.
Queens
Blueflower-A blue-grey she-cat with green eyes.Kits-Spotkit, and Mousekit
Kits
Mousekit- A black and grey tomkit with yellow eyes.
Spotkit- A calico she-kit with yellow eyes.
Planetclan

Leader
Planetstar- A white tom with grey paws and blue eyes.
Deputy
Lightspirit- A light coloured tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Warriors
Dawnflower-A light grey she-cat with green eyes.
Duskstripe-A grey tabby she-cat with amber eyes.Apprentice-Furypaw
Fireclaw- A reddish-brown tom with amber eyes.Apprentice-Flamepaw
Sparrowfang-A dark brown tom with blue eyes.Apprentice-Marspaw
Blackstripe- A black tabby she-cat with green eyes.Apprentice-Petalpaw
Medicine cat
Mistystream- a grey tabby she-cat with yellow eyes.Apprentice-Lifepaw
Apprentices
Furypaw-A brown she-cat with white front paws and amber eyes.
Flamepaw-a reddish brown tom with blue eyes.
Marspaw-A black she cat with white back paws, and a white tail tip. Eyes are dark green.
Petalpaw-A grey she-cat with green eyes.
Medicine cat apprentice
Lifepaw-A calico she-cat with blind green eyes.
Queens
Leafheart-A light brown tabby with green eyes.Kits-Flowerkit.
Kits
Flowerkit-A calico she-kit with blue eyes.
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Re: The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

Postby Serenity. » Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:08 am

( hey, Sailormoon? can i join after???)
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"I'm at the edge of the world
Where do I go from here?
Do I disappear?
Edge of the world
Should I sink or swim?
Or simply disappear?

Your eyes are swallowing me
Mirrors start to whisper
Shadows start to sing
My skin's smothering me
Help me find a way to breathe"
- Sleepwalking - Bring me the horizon.


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Re: The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

Postby obsolete dream » Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:14 am

Chapter one

Planetstar lay in the leaders den of his clan. He could feel Lightspirit pawing him. "Wake up!", Lightspirit mewed. Planetstar opened one eye sleepily and blinks. "What, Lightspirit?", he asked sleepily.
"Intruders from Moonclan!", Lightspirit hissed. "WHAT?", Planetstar hissed, wide awake now. Planetstar rose and hissed as he bounded out of the den. Right there, in the middle of the fight, was Moonstar! Planetstar leaped at Moonstar, knocking her over on her shoulder.
"Leader versus leader"he hissed in the she-cat's ear before biting her neck.
Moonstar yowled and shook him off.
. Shadeheart was watching from a distance. She ran and barreled into Planetstar, hissing things like 'mouse-brain'. "You do not hurt out leader!" she hissed at him.
Planetstar shook his pelt.
"Shut up!" he hissed and stalked off toward his den.
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Re: The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

Postby Gui-Chi » Thu Apr 19, 2012 3:56 am

(good so far! Keep writing!)
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Re: The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

Postby obsolete dream » Sun Apr 22, 2012 4:47 am

Thanks a lot!

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Re: The time of Moonclan and Planetclan

Postby obsolete dream » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:26 pm

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