Dawnstar's life

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Dawnstar's life

Postby Whiteclan » Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:05 am

WARNING: ANY KILLING IN HERE GOES TO THE CLANS. I MEAN TWILIGHTCLAN AND DAWNCLAN... OF MY CLANS

Twilight clan
Leader: Twlilghtstar- A black she-cat with blue eyes App: Maskpaw
Deputy: Bonepool- A black and white tom with green eyes App: Pathpaw
Medcicne Cat: Lilyheart- A silver she-cat with blue eyes
Med Cat app: Flowerheart- A gray she-paw with blue eyes
Med cat app 2: Firepaw- A red she-paw with blue eyes
WARRIORS
Icebreath- A white tom with gray eyes App: Breathpaw
Thorntail- A brown tom with green eyes
Thornfire- A red tom with blue eyes
Swifthead- A white tom with blue eyes
APPRENTICES
Breathpaw- A white she-paw with green eyes
Maskpaw- A black she-paw with blue eyes
Pathpaw- A gray she-paw with 1 green eye and 1 gray eye
Firepaw- A red she-paw with blue eyes
QUEENS
Dawneyes- A dark gray she-cat with blue eyes. Is expecting Thornfire's kits
Dawnmask- A light gray she-cat with green eyes. Has Swiftheads kit. Headkit(A white she-kit)
Fuzzytail- A white fuzzy she-cat with blue eyes. Is expecting Icebreath's kit
ELDERS
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Dawnclan
Leader: Dawnstar- A light gray she-cat with blue eyes (has black spots all over her) App: Furpaw
Deputy: Icetail- A white she-cat with ice blue eyes App: Shadowpaw
Medicine Cat: Thorneyes- A dusty brown tom with blue eyes
Med cat app: Skytail- A dark creamy white she-paw with blue eyes
WARRIORS
Spottedmask- A orange she-cat with black spots all over her face with green eyes
Fuzzymask- A gray fuzzy she-cat with blue eyes
Brambletail- A brown and white tom with green eyes App: Legspaw
Brightstalker- A brown and gray tom with blue eyes App: Tailpaw
Spottedtalon- A gray she-cat with blue eyes App: Facepaw
APPRENTICES
Tailpaw- A white tom with blue eyes
Facepaw- A gray she-paw with blue eyes
Legspaw- A black she-paw with gray eyes
Furpaw- A black and brown she-paw with green eyes
Shadowpaw- A black tom with 1 green eye and 1 half blue half yellow eye (Blue on the top yellow on the bottom)
QUEENS
Twlilightface- A black she-cat with blue eyes. Is expecting Brambletails kits.
Twlilighttail- A very dark brown she-cat with blue eyes. Has Brightstalker's kits. Flowerkit(A dark brown and gray she-kit), Maskkit(A orange tom), and Skykit(A brown tom)
ELDERS


CHAPTER 1
Dawnstar woke up. 'Grand a new night a new day ... for killing' "Dawnstar Dawnstar" Icebreath called. "Coming" Dawnstar called. Every morning a new task to do. She stood up. Weak from last night's battle. She had killed an apprentice last night. No that apprentice deserved to die. Hmm what about that other apprentice. 'How will I kill her? For she is the one. Can I lure her to a Thunderpath. Harsh but it just might work. But first...' She slide out of the den. "Icebreath! I need to talk to you." She called. Icebreath came running up fast. "Icebreath. I'm heading for a walk okay." Dawnstar growled. "Okay just call if you need anything" "Okay"

She walked into Twilightclan territory. 'Ahh. Perfect' She thought. She leapt across and landed on Fuzzytail. Fuzzytail tried to fling her off. Just like that she ran off. 'Pathpaw YES!' She ran out and called "I'm on your territory. What are you going to do about it?" Pathpaw chased her and she ran on to the Thunderpath "Come get me" Dawnstar called. Pathpaw yowled "Look out" Dawnstar whipped her head around A MONSTER "NOO!" She wailed as the monster hit her.

She woke up in Moonclan. "I'm dead" Dawnstar cried. "NO YOU ARE NOT" A white cat appeared. "You would be white but you are not. Now rest for a moment. Why do you kill?" Dawnstar just looked at him and spoke "I have a boring life. I have 8 lives now. I kill becuase it's fun. I hate Twilightclan. For it's dumb. DIE TWILIGHTCLAN DIE!" Gasps came no filled the air. A chant became "You can change and live a happy life you can change and live a happy life you can changer and live a happy life" "NO I WILL NOT" Dawnstar yowled The white cat spoke again "If you cange before 5 lives you will be in Moonclan not Dark Forset" Dawnstar just was about to attack him when she woke up. On the side of the Thunderpath. "I'm alive" Dawnstar gasped. Icebreath looked at her "You have to be more careful."

CHAPTER 2
I will start this chapter if 5 people like it
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Re: Dawnstar's life

Postby Whiteclan » Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:44 am

Um make it 1 person who is not me who likes it????????
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