The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:07 am

Disclaimer: I don't own the warriors series

WIP

The plot

Word has spread about Starclan, and new clans of cats are forming all over the land. Follow the journey of some of these new clans, as they try to survive the first few moons of the hardships that all clans must face. However, what does this new prophecy mean? Are these new clans cursed by some unknown force?


All of the new clans are formed from loners and rogues. Can they learn the warrior code?

The prophecy
Before the moon arises, the black fox will strike, and all will be destroyed



Alliances:

Oakclan:

Leader: Brightstar - A white she cat with emerald green eyes
Deputy: Tigerpelt - A dark ginger tabby tom with
Medicine cat: Stormwhisper - a small dark grey she cat with blue eyes
Warriors:
Darkclaw - a black tom with blue eyes -apprentice Mousepaw-
Bluestripe: A fuzzy blue grey tom with amber eyes -apprentice Thistlepaw-
Rueclaw: A pale ginger she cat with amber eyes
Birdstorm: A tortoiseshell she cat with green eyes -apprentice Moonpaw-
Apprentices:
Mousepaw: A brown tom with grey eyes
Thistlepaw: A dark brown tabby she cat with amber eyes
Moonpaw: A dark grey she cat with grey eyes
Queens:
Silverfur: A silvery grey she cat with blue eyes
Kits:
Runningkit: light brown tabby tom
Rainkit: Grey she cat


Marshclan:

Leader: Reedstar- Dark tabby tom
Deputy: Mudstripe- Brown she cat with dark amber eyes
Medicine cat: Wetwhisker: Light brown tom
Warriors:
Leafstorm: A tortoiseshell she cat with blue eyes
Blackwing: A muscular black tom
Gingerclaw: Ginger tom
Cloudfeather: White she cat
Apprentices:
Foxpaw: A ginger tom
Frogpaw: Black and white tom
Queens:
Sunfeather: A light ginger she cat. expecting kits.
Elders:
Scarfur


Nightclan:


This is unfinished, at the moment, so I apologise. Please leave suggestions of what you want to happen below!
Last edited by Gui-Chi on Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:38 pm, edited 3 times in total.
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:33 am

Chapter 1

Thistlepaw yawned as she woke up. Sunlight filtered through the brambles that were the apprentices den. She sat up, and looked around, her sister Moonpaw, wasn't there. She shrugged and started to give herself a good lick. The young tabby then headed out of the den, and into the Oakclan clearing.

When Thistlepaw was in the sunny clearing, she soon spotted her sister Moonpaw talking to Mousepaw by the freshkill pile. She bounded up to them, avoiding passing cats on the way.
"Hi guys!" She mewed cheerily. Moonpaw purred in amusement
"Good afternoon sis" The small grey she cat responded. Thistlepaw looked up, and realised that it was indeed past Sunhigh.
"Why didn't you guys wake me?" She complained, heading towards the camp entrance. "I was meant to do battle training today!" The apprentice then ran out of camp, and down to the training area, where her mentor was hopefully waiting for her.

When Thistlepaw reached the training area, she noticed that Bluestripe, her mentor, was not there. She lifted her muzzle to sniff the air, and realised that Bluestripe had been there, and recently too. The tabby crouched down, and started to track her mentor through the forest. She enjoyed the exercise, as she could hear the birds singing in the trees, and there was a light breeze that seemed to make the air seem fresh. Thistlepaw climbed over tree roots, and was careful to avoid falling down rabbit holes. It wasn't long until she found Bluestripe sitting by the stream that ran through the territory.
"Hi!" She mewed, however the tom didn't react for a few moments
"Why where you not ready in time?" He asked her in a monotone. Thistlepaw hung her head in shame
"I slept in" She answered regretfully "I stayed up late last night chatting to Mousepaw" Bluestripe however, ignored her answer
"We're going hunting. Come on" Thistlepaw nodded her reply, and scented the air, she could smell mouse! She scanned the area, and spotted it near some bramble bushes, not far from where she was. She crept forwards, making sure she was light on her paws so as not to alert her prey, and leapt at it. She quickly bit into it's neck and gave thanks to Starclan. When she turned around to see Bluestripe, he was gone.
"No fair" She muttered to herself "I was looking forwards to battle training" She continued hunting, although she was still rather upset that she had missed doing battle training.

Yes! I finished the first chapter! The next chapter will be from Moonpaw's point of view! Please review! Thankyou Starthorn for reading this for me!!!
Last edited by Gui-Chi on Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:33 am, edited 4 times in total.
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Fri Apr 06, 2012 3:15 am

Chapter 2:

Moonpaw sighed and shook her head as her sister ran out of camp. Thistlepaw could be so mousebrained sometimes! The silvery cat turned her attention back to Mousepaw
"How about we go get some fresh kill?" She asked, they had already hunted that day, and brought back a lot of prey each.
"Sure" Purred Mousepaw, as they started to make their way over to the fresh kill pile. Moonpaw picked out a juicy rabbit, which they were going to share. They both walked back to the apprentices den. The two apprentices sat down outside the den, and sat down. Mousepaw took the first bite of the rabbit.

WIP
Last edited by Gui-Chi on Tue Apr 10, 2012 2:20 am, edited 3 times in total.
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Fri Apr 06, 2012 7:43 am

(bump)
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:29 am

(bump)
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Starthorn » Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:30 am

Excellent my dear Mcduff.
Last edited by Starthorn on Fri Feb 30, 2012BC 13:00 am, edited ∞ times in total.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅
ѕтaятнoяn
☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅
Image
☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅
I actually made a signature... I suppose I should feel proud... when I feel mundane >.< (Still work in progress mark you)
[тяaᴅeѕ][ғanғiction][ѕнeяʟocᴋ][ᴏeᴋaᴋi][тaʙ'ѕ weʙѕiтe]
User avatar
Starthorn
 
Posts: 2155
Joined: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:23 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:31 am

le sigh... Arigato Emi-chan!!!! :)
now stop calling me mac duff please
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:41 am

(bump)
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Starthorn » Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:49 am

Excellent GUI.
Last edited by Starthorn on Fri Feb 30, 2012BC 13:00 am, edited ∞ times in total.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
Image
☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅
ѕтaятнoяn
☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅
Image
☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅☂☼☁❅
I actually made a signature... I suppose I should feel proud... when I feel mundane >.< (Still work in progress mark you)
[тяaᴅeѕ][ғanғiction][ѕнeяʟocᴋ][ᴏeᴋaᴋi][тaʙ'ѕ weʙѕiтe]
User avatar
Starthorn
 
Posts: 2155
Joined: Fri Jul 29, 2011 4:23 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: The new clans (A warrior cats fanfic)

Postby Gui-Chi » Sat Apr 07, 2012 12:52 am

correction- Gui-chi
User avatar
Gui-Chi
 
Posts: 4405
Joined: Thu Jun 16, 2011 12:05 am
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest