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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Eleven Up!

Postby . ME » Fri Apr 13, 2012 12:41 pm

New chappie will be up tomorrow.
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Eleven Up!

Postby . ME » Sat Apr 14, 2012 5:34 am

Chapter Twelve:

Dustpaw coughed up some sand as he was dropped onto the ground with a soft thump. "Why are you being so friendly?" He coughed. "ShadowClan is the meanest, most evilest Clan!".

The matted tom looked at him sharply. Dustpaw flinched, and said "Sorry!". Then Dustpaw looked around. The RiverClan camp was empty!

The fresh-kill pile was only two dusty, old fish and a scrawny water vole. It was covered in sand, dirt, dust, and even some mud. The dens were destroyed-Only debris was left. There wasn't even the slightest trace of any life besides a few dirty paw-prints and some...Blood!

Dustpaw's heart quickened. He turned to the ShadowClan cats and whimpered, though they seemed just as surprised. "Why aren't they here?" Dustpaw whined. One of the tabby she-cats stepped up, her bones showing out of her sides and her fur clotted up with blood.

"We think we know who did this." She said softly. Then the other tabby she-cat stepped up. The two seemed like twins. "Dark Forest. They took over WindClan. WindClan must have attacked RiverClan with the Dark Forest and drove the remains of them deep into the heart of their territory." She explained.

Dustpaw froze along with all the other cats. A new scent was in the air. It was windy, and grassy, yet also it reeked of blood and darkness...But what the scariest was...It was familiar.
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Twelve Up!

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Sat Apr 14, 2012 2:56 pm

OH NO!
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Twelve Up!

Postby growl.lingo » Sun Apr 15, 2012 1:26 am

OH noes ;A; first no one there for dustpaw and now I'm pretty sure windclan is coming too attack ;A;
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Twelve Up!

Postby . ME » Sun Apr 15, 2012 5:29 am

Chapter Thirteen:

Dustpaw shivered. Darkness swallowed the sky that used to be bright and sunny. It was perfectly dark-No moon. No light. "What is happening?!" He cried. The familiar scent grew stronger and stronger.

Yowls split the air. Dustpaw shrieked as the scent took over and blood seeped out of wounds. If only they didn't have such dark pelts! If only the bright, sunny day had not turned into a moonless night!

The only thing that gave the hint cats were here was the glowing, vicious, blood-thirsty eyes. They were all lit up with ambition. Amber, yellow, green, blue, violet, and brown gazes lit the night.

Dustpaw slashed his paws everywhere. It would only be luck if he hit any cat. Then he stopped. A vision appeared in his mind;

He was on a starry field. His ancestors surrounded him. "Don't give up," They whispered. "Never give up hope. You can win this."

He jolted back. He hissed as he saw amber eyes. He leaped onto its face, sinking his claws into the bright eyes. It felt gross, gooey and wet, and he finally let go.

He then leaped onto a cat with sparkling blue eyes back, and bit into it's throat. He tossed it aside, and leaped onto another cat. He felt power and strength coursing through his veins. The words repeated over and over in his head; Don't give up, Never give up hope. You can win this.

He continued to battle until they were driven out. The sun appeared back in the sky, brighter then ever. The ShadowClan cats were bloody, but happy. They had won.

Dustpaw turned to them. They were smiling at him. "Don't get so happy," He said softly. "It's not over yet.".
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Thirteen Up!

Postby growl.lingo » Sun Apr 15, 2012 11:37 am

hehehe thank god starclan I thought poor dusty was gonna die >< the power of writing ~<3

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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Thirteen Up!

Postby agendervamp » Tue Apr 17, 2012 12:10 pm

I love it! :D Your story is AMAZ-ING!
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Thirteen Up!

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Tue Apr 17, 2012 12:15 pm

More please
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Thirteen Up!

Postby . ME » Fri Apr 20, 2012 3:49 am

Chapter Fourteen:

Badgerstar yawned. He leaped onto one of the large branches of the tree, and the Gathering started. Everything quieted down. But then Badgerstar froze-Littlestar was not here.

"Where is Littlestar? RiverClan is not here with him..." Badgerstar asked. Screamstar, leader of WindClan, shrugged. "We'll have to start without them..." He said, his voice chillingly cold. Badgerstar shivered, and just nodded.

He looked down at WindClan. It was a tangle dark grey and black cats-No other colors. Badgerstar shook his head solemnly, and listened to Screamstar as he reported what was happening.

"We will not see RiverClan for a while..." He started, his voice still harsh, icy, and cold. "WindClan has driven them far, far into the heart of their territory!" He shouted, and the WindClan warriors cheered. "But with great victory comes great sadness...Thornfrost, Duskflame, Nightwatcher, Mosseyes, Wanderinggaze, Scorchpelt, Stormnight, and Roaringstorm of WindClan have died." He said, with fake grief.

Badgerstar's eyes flashed with anger. That was clearly not real grief. He had not cared his warriors had died bravely for his Clan-Which was going against the Warrior Code! "I'd like to speak next..." He said, taking a step up.

Just as he was about to speak, three ShadowClan cats and a RiverClan apprentice ran in. Badgerstar recognized Tatteredpelt, the muscular, matted, dark tom, and then there was also the two pale, light brown tabby she-cats-Palewhisker and Whisperingfur. As for the little brown apprentice, he was a medicine cat apprentice named Dustpaw.

"We need your help! WindClan is training with the Dark Forest! They are the ones killing out the cats!" Whisperingfur yowled.
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Re: ƒear| Warriors Fan-Fic | Chapter Fourteen Up!

Postby QUITLIKEFOURYEARSAGO » Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:20 pm

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