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Tears

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:25 am

can't you see my pain?
can't you see my fear?
why can't you see my tears.

i hide in the rain,
i deal with the pain
of how you treat me.

let me go,
you corrupted my heart,
and now it is ice and snow.

i bleed, and breathe
i bleed,
and i breathe no more.

can't you see my pain?
can't you see my fear?
why can't you see my tears?

someone please, please help me.
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Re: Tears

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:51 am

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Re: Tears

Postby DragonLoverHere » Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:22 pm

Royal, you know we will always be there to dry your tears. They will not be ignored any time. Stay strong, girl, and hang in there, cause we need you. *Hugs*
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Re: Tears

Postby Fairdevin » Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:15 pm

you are the one that can keep us laughing you move our group's rusted gears
you can be strong when the moment requires now I beg you dry those tears

too much you are too hard on one I have known
that person has a name that's your own

Rachel you just don't understand you are never alone
when you need help with ANYTHING you're never on your own

the entire group is there to help even I can plainly see
If you can't tell we got your back you're more insane than me

-Sincerely Alex

cheer up Rachel
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Re: Tears

Postby DragonLoverHere » Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:28 pm

Yeah, if you can't see that, you most definitely are more insane then FD, and THAT is scary! :what:
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Re: Tears

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Sat Mar 24, 2012 10:42 am

really? thanks guys...
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Re: Tears

Postby RedInkedWolf323 » Sat Mar 24, 2012 12:34 pm

Yes Rachel, never think your alone.
That was a really good poem, both for Royal and Fair D. (Sorry to butt in this way, please try not to think i'm that rude, but don't forget, were not really supposed to say our real names on here other than in pm with people who you know out of CS)

Anyway:

You may think all of life
Is cold and dark with strife.

But don't you quite forget
Your life's not over yet.

And together, with your friends
All your problems will mend.

So if you have some trouble
We'll be there on the double.

The sun will shine again once more
And the birds will flap their wings and soar.

So give us that beautiful smile, we know that you can show
Because your one of the strongest people that i've ever known.

Sincerely M~

Also, listen to this song. I believe its pretty true, and I think it kind of teaches a lesson :) :
Stronger (What Doesn't Kill You)
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Content is time,
While watching all.
Holding back
From crying.

Singing the song
Of Wind and Waves,
As everything
Was dying.
-carcinoGeneticist323

I used to be Oliveleaf323
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Re: Tears

Postby DragonLoverHere » Sat Mar 24, 2012 1:54 pm

*Squeak of luff* I absolutely LOVE that song! It's a total fav!
*Feels poetic urge from you guys*

Thorns sharp, petals soft,
Life is the Rose of our worlds;
The beautiful pain

IDK, but I find this little haiku I wrote comforting whenever things are bleak, because despite the world's thorn sharp agony, there is still the soft and beautiful times of the world that make life worth the pain. Maybe you will find some comfort
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Re: Tears

Postby RedInkedWolf323 » Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:45 pm

Yeah, I was poetically inspired by them ^^ and wow! Thats really good too :D and it really is (kind of weirdly) comforting ^u^
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Content is time,
While watching all.
Holding back
From crying.

Singing the song
Of Wind and Waves,
As everything
Was dying.
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I used to be Oliveleaf323
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Re: Tears

Postby RoyalDarkness316~ » Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:41 am

:cry: :cry: :cry: i don't deserve you guys...
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