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Bravery and Hour

Postby Lauraine » Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:41 am

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CHAPTER 1

Love, it wasn't easy. But, to some people it was. Bravery stood on the street, the pouring rain was crashing down upon the rough surface, causing a beautiful sound to errupt. His paws were soakedd, but his claws were dry. His ears were flat, and his head up high. He loved the view of his beutiful city, for it reminded him of when he was a child. The darkness began to seep into the sky, turning into night. The wind pulled at his fur rapidly. His breath as silk as snow. The breeze began to become a lot colder every minute. His breath turned to fog very quickly, and he began to quiver. He decided that he should go home soon, so he got up and walked toward his house. But, one thing he was not lucky to find was his little brother, lying dead in the street.

CHAPTER 2

Bravery let an evil shiver quiver up his spine. He didn't see anything to show what may have done this, no blood, n tracks. He sniffed him fearfully, checking for any clear sign. Suddenly, he saw it. He saw Ghostly's heart stop beating, there must have been a malfunction. He put his paw upon Ghostly's chest, no movement. Bravery stood there, wincing in his pain. Why do things have to be this way? he asked himself. He shook away his tears. Suddenly, he could see a beautiful dog padding toward Ghostly's limp body.

CHAPTER 3

"Who are you?" Bravery growled, letting his anger ooze out of him. " I don't think that really matters," she said; She looked down to see the dead body."Oh dear," she said, her eyes growing round. Bravery noticed her fur prick up like an electric shock, and her eye's turning to stone. "What?" Bravery asked. ""I killed him," she cried, letting the tears wash down her face. "What? he asked, in shock that such a beautiful dog could do so much harm. " I killed him," she repeated. "Why?" he asked, trying to keep calm. "Well, my cousin's stepgrandmother's father's friend is a poisonous spider named Burrito. I don't know why. But anyways, I was talking with him and my sister because they ahd just gotten together. Until, my sister Julianne, let her mouth come before her thoughts; She made fun of him because his butt was red like a baboons," she sighed. "What on earth does that have to do with my brother?" he raged. "Well, he was fierce, and again, poisonous. Your brother must have been in sight of the spider, and Burrito bit him sharply. The horrible shrieking noise from the innocent little creature. I didn't know what to do, so I stood there until someone came back for help. And I thought it was you..But it's not," she said. "Then you didn't kill him!" he said. "I know, but I must take the blame for it," she hung her head low. "No.It wasn't you!" he pleaded. "You don't understand," she tried to explain. "I'm reporting Burrito to the police!" he yowled, running across th street toward the city. "YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND!" She shrieked. Then, she fell onto her stomach, and covered her crystal-like eyes with her fluffy white paws. Bravery's ears perked, and he turned around. "Please, tell me what is going on!" he said. "No. This is not your information," she said. " But I want to help-" "No! I said no! I don't need help and I don't need you!" she roared full of anger. Bravery stood stiff like a soldier, holding in his tears. Bravery turned around and ran off into the fields.

CHAPTER 4 COMING SOON!
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Re: Bravery and Hour

Postby Lauraine » Sun Mar 11, 2012 4:03 pm

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Re: Bravery and Hour

Postby Lauraine » Mon Mar 12, 2012 2:35 pm

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Re: Bravery and Hour

Postby the timey thing » Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:40 am

It's pretty interesting, though maybe longer chapters? C:

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Re: Bravery and Hour

Postby Lauraine » Fri Mar 16, 2012 2:22 pm

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Postby Lauraine » Fri Apr 27, 2012 4:51 pm

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