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~Ì¢êþêl†~ †hê §†ðr¥ ð£ å Ðrêåmêr

Postby rustic . » Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:12 pm

Chapter One
The first waking
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Mewling. Mewling of hungry kits. Moonsong, a beautiful gray tabby had her eyes set on her kits. " Come my kits" she whispered, pushing her kits closer to her belly with her tail.
Icekit, the oldest of the litter suckled first, taking the most milk. Her short haired blue and gray fur shined in the warm sunlight. Moonsong always kept her kits outside when it was warm.
Then Pinekit and Grasskit started to drink some milk.
Moonsong smiled " Icekit, Pinekit and Grasskit. Such beautiful kits, there my little warriors" she whispred, admiring the kits.
Icekit yawned, showing her pink tonuge. Then just like that she opened her baby blues. She looked at Moonsong with a smiled then mewed.
Moonsong widen her eyes " Mossbush! Come quickly!" she yelled.
The young she-cat rushed in " What? What is it-" she stopped talking when she saw Icekit. " Icekit! S-she's opening her eyes!" she exclaimed
Icekit smiled then crawled to her. Her bright eyes looked up at her as she showed her gums.
Mossbush smiled " Icekit, your growing up fast!" she mewed to her.
Icekit grinned then closed her eyes back up, ploping down in Mossbushes foot.
Mossbush laughed then slowly withdrawed her paw, leaving Icekit sleeping on the grass.
Moonsong smiled then picked up Icekit. She is gentle placed her wihth the others and licked her " My little warrior" she whispered before lokoing back at Mossbush.
Mossbush nodded " I will leave you alone" she mewed, taking a step back and leaving.
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Re: ~Ì¢êþêl†~ †hê §†ðr¥ ð£ å Ðrêåmêr

Postby Isiaela » Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:26 pm

Nice. :)
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Re: ~Ì¢êþêl†~ †hê §†ðr¥ ð£ å Ðrêåmêr

Postby rustic . » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:20 am

Chapter 2
Meeting

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Icekit woke from a hardy voice. " She did? Ha! That's my kit!"
Her eyes opened as she saw a large gray tom.
The gray tom looked at her and smiled. Looking at her, he licked her face " Icekit, i'm your father. Grayshade" he mewed in a gentle vocie
Icekit smiled and licked him back with her little pink tongue.
" What about the others?" the Grayshade asked.
" Pinekit and Grasskit are doning well" a sweet soft voice replied.
Icekit closed her eyes again, and layed down.
" But they haven't open here eyes yet!" he repiled.That was the last of what Icekit could hear before drifting off to sleep.
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Re: ~Ì¢êþêl†~ †hê §†ðr¥ ð£ å Ðrêåmêr

Postby Isiaela » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:21 am

Awww........
the picture's so cute!!
And I love it...
Dear Mods,
My sister is quitting, so please don't ban us as she does that!

My new dreamie is the red Beta fish from 2009, which is uncommon. PM me for why! :)
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http://www.felisfire.com/?ref=8275 <--You must click the register button on the side. Please do not remove 'Spiritfire24~Heart-broken......' Thanks if you register! If you do register under 'Spiritfire24~Heart-broken......', you can PM me, Isiaela for details. :) Or you can use this one:
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Re: ~Ì¢êþêl†~ †hê §†ðr¥ ð£ å Ðrêåmêr

Postby Isiaela » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:23 am

You're welcome. :)
Dear Mods,
My sister is quitting, so please don't ban us as she does that!

My new dreamie is the red Beta fish from 2009, which is uncommon. PM me for why! :)
(http://static.chickensmoothie.com/archi ... &bg=6189da)

http://www.felisfire.com/?ref=8275 <--You must click the register button on the side. Please do not remove 'Spiritfire24~Heart-broken......' Thanks if you register! If you do register under 'Spiritfire24~Heart-broken......', you can PM me, Isiaela for details. :) Or you can use this one:
http://www.felisfire.com/?ref=8797 <--Same thing as one above-just my sister asking me for a favor. :D
Please, that site is awesome! Please do it for me, even if you don't know me... :(
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Re: ~Ì¢êþêl†~ †hê §†ðr¥ ð£ å Ðrêåmêr

Postby You are a Pirate » Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:16 pm

I like it so far :)
Minor grammar and spelling errors but otherwise it's perfect.
"Why?" The girl cried. "Why can't we be together? I love you more than anything, yet you reject me."
The boy tore away. "I-I'm sorry. I can't tell you."
She wept. "I must know. Please, tell me why."
The boy stayed silent.
"Please..." She said. "I love you."
He finally replied. "I can't love you because...because you are a pirate."
The girl stared at him. "I'm a what?"
"You are a pirate, you're all pirates except me! Because I'm a princess!"
The girl narrowed her eyes. "Isn't it the other way around? I am a pirate, you are a princess?"
"NU! You are a pirate, and I'm a pretty pretty princess! M'kay?!"
"What?"
"Problem?"
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