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Postby kami_ » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:22 am

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Re: blackness

Postby naturalharmony. » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:26 am

toffeebon1359 wrote:i just made this up on the spot XD

it was a warm yet windy day, the wind blowing through my soft silky hair. The sun glowing a beautiful yellow. I smile it was a perfect day! until the sun disappeared out of sight. the sky taken over by a thick foggy black mist. I shiver crept slowly up my spine. Cold droplets of water bucket down making my hair wet and soggy and me feeling blue, dark blue. I ran I was far away from home and i couldn't see where i was going. the droplets of water turned into hard icicles pelting down. hail. I fell over tired and hurt. Blood slowly came out from my knee. i cried a call to the heavens above, anyone.
I closed my eyes in pain a glow of white over came the blackness. I opened my eyes slowly. I squinted the whiteness was getting brighter and brighter and more luminous by the second. I closed my eyes again the world spinning round. i opened my eyes slowly i was in a beautiful white gown my long brunette hair flowing behind me. But i was in a room. a dark room. old toys scattered everywhere. rocking chairs every where and pictures that seemed to follow your every single move. everything covered in a thick layer dust. i gulped. the rocking chairs rocked slowly. I had seemed to of called to the nightmares. I collapsed to the floor in sadness. this was how i was to lead the rest of my life.



really good!
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Re: blackness

Postby kami_ » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:27 am

thx XD i would say something but nothing to say cuz i made it up on the spot
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Re: blackness

Postby kami_ » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:41 am

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Re: blackness

Postby naturalharmony. » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:46 am

toffeebon1359 wrote:I didn't want to go to school today. all my friends smiling at me but my miserable face was gloomy. i had been over taken by a terrible sadness a terrible secrete. It wasn't my fault that it happened, the gang. I wanted my own back they had upset my best friend but i really should of stayed out of it! but how could i she was in tears. I did my big talk i stuck up for myself i stuck up for all the people around me. I thought of all the people who would of dreamed to do what i was doing. I was half way through talking to the gang when one of the members eyes turned a deep Scarlett. they looked at me and hissed and me. i fell back startled i ran away from the member.
and from that day i was all ways sad my lips thin and withered my eyes had heavy bags under them my face as pale as paper. My shadow had gone climbed in side of me making me dark and gloomy!



That one's wird but I like it1
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Re: blackness

Postby kami_ » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:47 am

i know i got bored XD
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Re: blackness

Postby kami_ » Sat Mar 03, 2012 10:19 am

there are two paths. One full of rainbows and happy things and another full of black clouds and rain and all things that get you down. there is a girl very pretty long brunette that flows gently down to her waist. she has bright blue eyes and pretty pink lips. you would of thought this girl would of picked the one full of rainbows and happy things but no she did not. she was a pretty girl but the path she wanted was the other one! she wanted to be feeling down and sad but she was clever as well. she knew if she picked the happy one she would be stuck with loads of other people who took that path so she choose the other one and was there all alone and peaceful and eventually she liked it and she dyed her hair purple and wore black lipstick and there was nothing anyone could do about it.
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