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The Dark Angel Story (Post Away)

Postby KogasBabyGirl » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:15 pm

I started Writing this story Its still kind of short and I may add more To the Shorter Chapters. This story was Fully Based on Dreams Ive had and Imagination. Anyway I dont own Any of the Pics. I will be drawing my own Very Soon tho


Talutah Sioux - The Main person in this story. Is a vampire.
Image Talutah in Her dark angel Vamp Form

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Talutah As a Human

Drake Bleanchard (werewolf name Demonclaw)- Is a werewolf and the new protecter of Talutah. Drake has a dark side but only shows it when protecting Talutah.

Image Drake as A Human

Image Drake as a WereWolf

Jack- Is Talutahs vampire teacher.Jack tends to get aggresive with Talutah only because he knows her power is much stronger then all the other vampires in the world.

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Micosh Fay- Micosh is a werewolf as well and (also the son of the leader of the pack). But he was the protecter of Talutah before Drake was, he takes great pride in protecting Talutah but comes to hate Drake for taking his place by Talutahs side and most of all for breaking the most trusted law known to Werewolf kind. Sharing your human form to a vampire. Which is a law he soon breaks later

Image As a Human
Image As A werewolf

Lady Hopud- Is a Dragon that takes the form of Drakes pet Great Dane. Lady is a Black Dragon that has many powers. She is also the Guardian of Drake, Michael, and Josette Blanchard. She rescued the young pups after a fire destoyed their home

Image As A human

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Michael Bleanchard - Is a werewolf. He is a social guy unlike Drake. He often helps out on hunting humans for Talutah to feed on. But other wise stays distant from her do to threats from Drake.

Image As a Human

Image As a Werewolf

Josette Blanchard- Is a werewolf. She has a crush on Micosh but wont tell him. Little does she know that Micosh was to be the leader of the pack soon and would choose her to join the pack and become his mate.

Image Josette as a human

Image Josette as a Werewolf

Prodack - Is a Dragon. Who takes on the form of Talutahs Father. Prodack has never let his true side show to Talutah but his Great enemy Lady has just moved in and he plans to find out a way to make her leave. But he doesnt know why she has come here and is almost clueless about what is to come.

Image ProDack as a human

Image Prodack as a Dragon

Strongbite the Killer - Is a werewolf. Strongbite Disapproves of Talutah knowing the werewolf Secret And wishes to kill her.

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Postby KogasBabyGirl » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:17 pm

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Prologue

Postby KogasBabyGirl » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:17 pm

I felt the burn that the man that was talking about before he laid me on his bed and had bit my neck. Just moments ago we were in the woods talking. He was a stranger, a new face to me. He had asked me for a favor and I was trying to be nice and said yes. I would have never said yes if I had known that he was a vampire who was after my “sweet” blood and to get it he would have to lay me on a bed make out with my neck. I would have so said no, but the more he takes the weaker yet greater I feel and if my lips could move I would tell him to take it all. I felt his fangs leave my neck and my world blurred. I looked at what used to be his face that was now nothing but a pale blur. He pulled me into his arms and I could feel him lick the remaining blood that trickled down my neck and collar bone as my world went black.
I woke up to see that what once was morning was midnight. I was in the woods again. “How did I get here?” I said aloud to myself, “Where is the man?” I smelt something. Something I would die to get in my mouth. Blood. I smelt the blood of a wolf. And I wanted that blood in my mouth right now. I stood up and ran top the source and the wolf was asleep. I wanted to sink my teeth right into the flesh of the wolf and tear it apart just to get to the blood. I snuck up trying to stay quiet . I got down on my knees and like some animal I bit into the neck of the wolf. The wolf howled and cried for help waking up to a horror movie or even its own nightmare. I didn’t stop sucking and I wasn’t going to. The blood swirled in my mouth, sending flavors I’ve never tasted but wish I had cross my tongue. The wolf thrashed around, only making this more satisfying and the flavors of its blood intensify.. After I was full I pulled my fangs that had shot out of my gums when I bit the poor wolf. I couldn’t help but feel really bad for the wolf so I stayed by its side and petted it till it woke up and I could stand. I was glad the wolf was ok but I was glad I could leave it alone for hopefully the rest of its life.

At home I was comforted by my foster dad. I was glad to see an old face. He kissed my cheek and took me to my room. I had lied but told the truth at the same time telling him that I was not feeling well. Because I was ok sick wise but mentally I was in a panic and wanted to scream. All I could think about was the man and the wolf. I wanted to leave and find the man. I wanted to cry knowing I had hurt a wolf my favorite animal. But I couldn’t do those things so I just laid my head down and thought of things to do while the weekend past and just hoped the school year would end very, very soon.
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Chapter 1: Confusion And the New Protection

Postby KogasBabyGirl » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:17 pm

The cold firey words slipped from his warm pink lips, that hid his fangs to their best ability, " You traitor! How dare you even think about showing your face here!!" He shouted with anger as he raised his hand and within seconds a dark pain shattered into my jaw. Jack let a smirk cross his lips as he mummbled, " I can't belive you, of all people, you told the werewolves of our hide out." I placed my hand against my jaw. I could feel it starting to swell. Tears swelled up in my eyes, wanting to show themselves to the world, I repeated what my grandfather used to tell me, " Talutah, Don't ever let others see you cry. It makes them see that you are weak and not a true vampire. That is why humans cry." I removed my hand from my face and then shoved Jack with all my strangth.
Jack fell back landing on his butt making the leafs under him crunch into thousands of pieces. I felt the aura of his anger grow stronger and stronger by the second. I wanted to stand and fight but out of habit I turned and ran. With great speed Jack stood to his feet and ran after me. As I was running I knew I could use my shapeshifting powers that me and Jack had resently worked on the change into my favoraite form.The Dark Angel. Strangely I am the only one of my kind, that I know of, that can change into such a wonderful but scary thing. Jack had caught up to me without me noticing. He grabbed the back of my T-shirt and sent me flying back into his chest nearly choking me.
"Talutah...." He said in a angerd voice. I waited for him to throw me into a near by tree or the ground or slap me again, " ....your getting faster and stronger,.." He let out in a calm voice, " Normally you can't even get me to move an inch or make me even break a swet." Jack let out a small smirk and a evil smile pirced his lips. At the most part I wanted to say "Thank you", but I was so confused of why he had calmed down so quickly. Was a human near by? I felt my lips part and words leave my lips that seemed to insult my teacher. " Or maybe your getting slower and weaker."

**At School the Next Day**

I was so hungry, My stomach growled in a rumbling fit as I griped it begging it to hush its loud tone so others couldnt hear it and offer me lunch. The scent of human blood was so strong in the little class room, but there were three new scents walking down the hall to the class room door. One the smell of peppermint, another the smell of cotton candy, the last the sweet romantic smell of the cologne, Chrome . Suddenly the class room door swang open in a thrash and hit the wall. There was what I was smelling at the door. A boy and a girl stood there, I could smell the third but couldn't yet see him. The girl, who was on the left of the boy, came into the class room and handed Mr. Jackson a note that I guess read thier names do to the nod that he gave the girl. The girl was the one who smelt like cotton candy and she sat in the front of the class. The boy that smelled like peppermint soon followed and pushed up his glasses and gave Mr. Jackson a nod in respect then sat in the middle of the class ing the middle row in the middle seat. I still hadn't seen the person who smelt of Chrome. The teacher then spoke. "Come in Son this is the right class." Mr. Jackson had always revered to his students as son or daughter.
A tall boy slowly walked into the room into the row next to me. His hood over his face. He took a seat next to me in the back of the class where the lights were always off (we all swore they never worked in the first place). He was like me he has a dark side I could tell. I started to like him as soon as he sat down. I could smell his colone. I was also intoxicated by the smell of his blood, but it was not human. I could tell he took note of my precance. He soon passed me a note. "My name is Drake Blanchard. I know your a vampire." I swollowed hard, he knew but how? I kept reading. The note went on telling me that he was a lycan (werewolf) known as Demonclaw. And I had been in his dreams (which creeped me out a bit.). But the thing is that got me the most was he told me that he was here to protect me and not to hurt me. At first I was confused, but then I remembered my fight with Jack and noticed that I was the werewolves most important and only insider to the life of the vampire. Without me the wolves would have no chance, but what I didnt notice it that I was going to make new enemies on this journey and also what I didn't know is that I was also considered a threat to the lycans very being.
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Chapter 2: The Smell and the Hunt

Postby KogasBabyGirl » Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:18 pm

"Claws wrapped around my wrist, Digging into my cold skin letting blood slide out. I screamed in pain the fire of the claws went flying through my very vains. I was in Baylet (the town I live in). I could smell the Pine Trees, but mostly my own blood. I felt warm breath against my ear, "Shhhhhh, It's O.K. I'll make sure you suffer greatly." The deep voiced man threw me to the ground and shoved his claws into my chest. I felt blood drip out of my nose and mouth." I sat up in my bed quickly gasping for air and gripping my chest.After regaining my sanitey I looked around my room, There was a figure at the foot of my bed. It's eyes glowed red. I felt somehow comforted by this somehow.
It was Drake, his blood was still now but his Cologne was still on my nose. Drake Jumpped up on my bed. I noticed he was walking on all fours and a tail and a pair of ears had grown on him. He was in his lycan form. He looked different from the ones I have encontered before. He smelt different too. Drake licked my fearful tears from my face. Soon after that he laid by me on his back, over the covers of course, and he gestered me to lay on his chest. I placed my head on his chest gently and listened to his quickend heart beat. As I laid there I felt Drake breath and wrap his warm fuzzy arms around me, his sharp claws lay gently on my cold skin.
I woke up, It was 3:30 in the morning on a Saturday. I could still feel Drake breathing and his warm fur against my cheek. His heart beat had slowed abit but not by much. I suddenly felt a rubbing against my side, thats when I noticed that Drakes paws had moved from my arm to under the blankets (with the rest of him) and his paws were now in my shirt on my side gently rubbing my skin. His tail was wrapped around my bare leg and the rest of his body against mine and the short red silk sleeping Dress I was wearing to bed. Drakes leg was over me as if doing his best to hide me from something. I suddenly got a big wiff of his blood scent and noticed it. When I was a new vampire to the world. I had smelt this blood before. It was the wolf that I had fed off of while it slept. Drake was the poor helpless wolf that had been my first feed. The words slipped out, I couldn't hold them in the guilt was now filling every being of my body, "I'm so so sorry, Drake." Then as if he had been told on cue he opened his eyes and whispered in the most calming voice, "It's ok, You were hungry. I am glad I was your first feed. Even though I could have been your last. And if you ever need more let me know I will be happy to hunt for u."

*At School on Monday*

I stood there in the hallway waiting for Drake to come walk me to class. I looked everyway before turning to my locker to grab some books I needed. Something grabed my arm I wanted to scream thinking that it was the man from my dreams. I turned in a flash to see who it was. It was Micosh. "Micosh its u my good friend." Micosh smiled and let go of my arm but then he looked at me with a face that always scared me. It was his face that said "I mean busniess." He spoke, " Stay away from him he is dangrous." I nearly laughed, "Micosh, Drake is harmless he would never hurt me." "Just Plz!!!" His voice echoing in the hall way. I pushed him back pittifully and left for my first class.

*At Lunch*

It was lunch still no sign of Drake. He had sent me a text that he was going hunting and would be back soon. My stomach growled and i whispered, "So many Humans, so much blood to drink." I looked at Michal and he seemed to get my message. I was going to go on a "walk" after school i was so hungry it was clear i couldnt always depend on Drake and Michal to always hunt for me. But the thing was it had to be at night when the sun was setting when my hunger was at its peak. I knew that the town would be crowded perfect for the right scent to come to my nose. And humans were always tired at the end of the day.


*Later That Night in Town*


The town was full of people and my eyes had turned blood red and my fangs flashed in the sunset. Drake appeared by my side and asked, "Why out so late my love?" I was inchanted by the smell of the blood below me as I sat on that buliding. He knew I was to far gone to listen or talk. I was starved so hungry. Then the perfect scent hit my nose and I was gone in a flash and I pick the human male up and threw him into the woods. I was takin by the hunt and ran around chasing the man before putting the hunt to an end by sinking my long fangs deep into his skin. I drank his blood deeply, devoring every drop. Drake walked up behind me and held me after I stood to my feet. I was still so hungry but i couldnt feed on 2 people in one night i could get sick from the mix.


Drake walked me home what I didnt know i was being watched by a new person in town some one on the kill.
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Chapter 3

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