Hey guys,
Im writing a story in chapters, so thats the order I will be posting in. I would love some critique, and if you bookmark it I write when a new chapter is up...so enjoy
Chapter 1-The secret-Violet
Dont forget to comment and critique.
The Portal. {Chapter 1 up}
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The Portal. {Chapter 1 up}
by ~NeverForgetAnimals~ » Mon Feb 27, 2012 11:13 pm
Δиιмαℓƨ αяɛ ℓιʌιиɢ
Ƭнɛʏ αяɛ ɛʌɛяʏтнιиɢ
Ħσω cσʋℓ∂ ʏσʋ ƨαʏ ʏσʋ нαʌɛ ωσи
Ɩғ αℓℓ ʏσʋ ∂ι∂ ωαƨ нʋят σиɛ.
Иɛɢℓɛcт, αвʋƨɛ αи∂ ραιи.
Ħσω cσʋℓ∂ ρɛσρℓɛ вɛ ƨσ ʌαιи.
Δℓℓ тнɛʏ ∂σ ιƨ ɢιʌɛ ʋƨ ℓσʌɛ
Ƴɛт ρɛσρℓɛ ɢιʌɛ тнɛм α ƨнσʌɛ
Ɯнɛи ρɛσρℓɛ вʋʏ ғяσм ρʋρρʏ мιℓℓƨ
тнɛʏ αяɛ ƨɛи∂ιиɢ α ƨтяαʏ σʋт σи тнɛ нιℓℓƨ
Ƨσ αℓℓ тнαт ι нαʌɛ ℓɛғт тσ ƨαʏ
Ɩƨ тσ нɛℓρ α ℓʋcκʏ ƨтяαʏ тσ∂αʏ
Ƭнɛʏ αяɛ ɛʌɛяʏтнιиɢ
Ħσω cσʋℓ∂ ʏσʋ ƨαʏ ʏσʋ нαʌɛ ωσи
Ɩғ αℓℓ ʏσʋ ∂ι∂ ωαƨ нʋят σиɛ.
Иɛɢℓɛcт, αвʋƨɛ αи∂ ραιи.
Ħσω cσʋℓ∂ ρɛσρℓɛ вɛ ƨσ ʌαιи.
Δℓℓ тнɛʏ ∂σ ιƨ ɢιʌɛ ʋƨ ℓσʌɛ
Ƴɛт ρɛσρℓɛ ɢιʌɛ тнɛм α ƨнσʌɛ
Ɯнɛи ρɛσρℓɛ вʋʏ ғяσм ρʋρρʏ мιℓℓƨ
тнɛʏ αяɛ ƨɛи∂ιиɢ α ƨтяαʏ σʋт σи тнɛ нιℓℓƨ
Ƨσ αℓℓ тнαт ι нαʌɛ ℓɛғт тσ ƨαʏ
Ɩƨ тσ нɛℓρ α ℓʋcκʏ ƨтяαʏ тσ∂αʏ
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