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Song...please read!

Postby broodingtulip » Mon Feb 27, 2012 3:19 pm

I made a song for my best friend...now my biggest crush. It goes like this:

Here we go
Smile on my face
The weathers cold
But Im warm inside
Just like I alwas am
Cuz when im w/ you
im tingly
oohoohohhoo
oh here we go
lets take it slow
the wind has blown
the whispers spoke
and here i am off my feet
cuz the wind has blown
and the whispers spoke
and here i am
out of sight
out of reach
so come
and catch me
so come
and
catch me
the weathers warm
im tingling inside
so here you go
so fast
you put
a smile
on my face
so there you go
once again
ooohohoooho
and i can't help it
ohoohhhooo
and i cant
deny...
the wind has blown
the whispers spoke
and you swept me off my feet
the wind has blown
the whispers spoke
here we go
out of sight
out of reach
so come
and
catch
us
oohoohooohohh
oohohohoh
the wind has blown
the whispers spoke
and im down on my knees
oohooh ohoh
begging them please
but the winds have blown
the whispers spoke
and i cant deny
oohohh
that im falling
falling hard
for my best friend
ohoohoho
im falling
falling
for
you
falling hard
falling
hard
so come and catch me
up
in
your arms
so here we go
out of sight
out of reach
cuz the winds have blown
the whipers
spoke
here we go
here we are
you and i
flying high
in the sky
out of sight
out of reach
so come catch us
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Postby snellabella » Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:40 am

this is awsome!!!
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Postby patrick star.. » Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:28 pm

I Totally Love it!
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                            Well, saying you're a kid, it's like saying I'M a kid!

                            Hi everyone. for starters I am a girl, I will always be one. anyways this is like my first favorite signature ever. for reals! okay? anyways, don't steal it! I also wanted too say if anyone out there is reading this and likes one direction. well I myself am a huge directioner and I will be happy to do a one on one with you, and a one direction plot. okay, I think this is lastly but. I am on like 24/7. no really I wake up at 8 am every day and go to bed as soon as I can see the sun outside. which is 4 am. though if i'm not on for an entire day that means I slept in longer and probably will go too bed around 5.

                            Uh, I'm supposed to get a toy with this?
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Postby broodingtulip » Tue Feb 28, 2012 4:14 pm

Thankyou ^.^
It's for my best friend who recently turned into my biggest crush >.<
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Postby snowflake276728 » Fri Mar 02, 2012 6:09 pm

Posting, do i get a cookie? XD
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Postby broodingtulip » Sat Mar 03, 2012 3:37 am

Yesh *hands cookie*
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