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Cloud

Postby Save Me » Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:42 pm

Puffy in the sky,
Floating around without care,
The thing that mocks us.
I act whole
I act happy
But inside
I am dying


Status: I am so confused right now. What do I do? Who can I turn to?

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Re: Cloud

Postby Save Me » Wed Feb 29, 2012 2:52 pm

Please reply and tell me what you think. Also, can you read my other poems please?
I act whole
I act happy
But inside
I am dying


Status: I am so confused right now. What do I do? Who can I turn to?

Purple is the color of love

Image
Adopt virtual pets at Chicken Smoothie!
My fav pet!
User avatar
Save Me
 
Posts: 129
Joined: Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:57 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

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