Serenity Bayle (Looking for critiques!)

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Serenity Bayle (Looking for critiques!)

Postby 7zebey » Sun Feb 26, 2012 3:39 pm

Serenity Bayle was that girl you could never figure out.

She was the girl people tried to label, but couldn't.

She was the girl who outsmarted the teachers,

And beat up the bullies.

Serenity Bayle was the resident albino.

She was the girl who didn't care what you thought.

She was the girl who told you to buzz off,

And leave her alone.

Serenity Bayle was thought to have come from the underworld.

She was the girl who could glare at someone and give them nightmares.

She was the girl who hated everybody,

And was hated by everybody.

Serenity Bayle was antisocial, a genius, sarcastic, bored, and pessimistic.

And Serenity Bayle was your best friend.
The lantern glows
In a flickering gold
And the wolves onyx eyes
Grow slowly more bold

"Come to me, child,
Come keep me warm"
"Come now child,
Aren't you here to perform?"

But as you stand still
In the very same place
A shocking scowl
Comes over her face

And her fair onyx eyes
Grow a shade much too cold
And they seem to tell stories
That should have never been told

She screams and she howls
And seethes with rage
And what seemed to be young
Is now showing age


So be quick now child
Do not stay
For instinct has told you
To run away.



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