Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

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Did you actually click on the link in my proud drawing? dude

yes i did and im not sorry
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby Squiddywind » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:20 am

Yes you should... Kidding, take your time! This is really good. Goodness, I just heard someone crash. Bye for now, keep up the good work!
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby oldlizmar » Wed Mar 07, 2012 12:03 pm

Awwww, I wasn't trying to be rude... Someone had to point out your flaws. Your head is getting pretty big... Lol. Maybe you could type it in Word (not Words) first?
Anyway, when you get the chance, reply to the PM story.
Anywayz, *pinkievoice* KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, CHOSENN.

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Oh, all the comrades that e’er I had, They’re sorry for my going away,
And all the sweethearts that e’er I’ve l
oved, They’d wish me one more Day to stay.
But since it falls unto my
lot, That I should rise and you should not,
I’ll gently rise and
softly call, Good night and joy be with you all,
Good
night and joy be with you all.

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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby coelagirl » Wed Mar 07, 2012 12:11 pm

Once again, sorry so short. I have to write another story for school.

Day 13
Friday, March 15


So we are friends again! Fang has been giving the new alliance evil looks every time they pass, and they've kept away from me.
Why do they fear him? Is there something going on I don't know about? Fang did seem awfully quick to come to my defense....

But why worry about my defense when I can worry about the play? ARGARGARGITSNOTASEASYASITHOUGTITWOULDBE.
Everybody thinks I can do everything.
After school, I finish my homework quickly and proceed to the auditorium, where I help with the play. Today, the crew began to construct the sets.
Until previously, I had thought People went out and bought new wood to create sets. I was wrong.
I came into the auditorium and found the set designer and a few crew members dragging a huge piece of plywood already painted multiple times from the backstage area.
"What's happening?" I asked
"Buildin'" he replied.
"It's the wrong shape." I pointed out
"It's going in the back."
"And what's going in the front?"
"That." he pointed to another group of crew members lugging another, larger, piece of plywood painted multiple times out from backstage.
"That's also the wrong shape." I said.
"I'm gonna cut it." he said proudly.
I shrugged and turned "As long as it works."
"Proud!"
"Marsh?" I looked up to see Marsh and Rose waving at me from the door "Rose? I thought you guys said you weren't gonna help."
"We reconsidered." called Rose
"Cool," I beamed "Let me show what you're gonna do."

After Marsh and Rose were settled into their painting jobs, I wandered off to the audience, where the actors were practicing.
To be short, I winced. Not that they were bad, just... not right. Wrong inflections, wrong accents, wrong expressions. I broke in and tried to help, but ended up getting in a row with Kira.

Thinks are just not turning out right.

Work on the play continues. Sadly.


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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:50 am

yay! More Proud!! I love it the way it is, don't change it!!!
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby coelagirl » Thu Mar 08, 2012 10:32 am

Thanks for the feedback guys.
Unfortunalty, I think no entry tonight. I have to write another story for my English class and then some homework after that. Sorry D:
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby coelagirl » Fri Mar 09, 2012 12:28 pm

No entry tonight either, for the sole reason that I just got a chance to play Skyrim. I'm so sorry for shirking in my duties TT.TT
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby Shark-salad » Fri Mar 09, 2012 12:31 pm

AWWWWW oh well but if you skip tomorow I WILL DIE
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby coelagirl » Fri Mar 09, 2012 12:48 pm

Erm... I may have to. I'm voulentering at an overnight thing at a museum and I don't know if I can write it. I may be able to write before or in between on my phone, but there will be LOADS of spelling errors and I'm not guaranteeing anything.
I feel so bad now.
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby Ɯσℓғ » Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:33 pm

Just read all of this instead of doing my violin and piano practice and I have a concert tomorrow. Oops! But it's just soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *Breath* soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *Breath* so good! I'm going to mark this down as my 30 minutes of reading todayz for English! Hehe!
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Re: Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

Postby Shark-salad » Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:43 pm

chosendragon wrote:Erm... I may have to. I'm voulentering at an overnight thing at a museum and I don't know if I can write it. I may be able to write before or in between on my phone, but there will be LOADS of spelling errors and I'm not guaranteeing anything.
I feel so bad now.

*dies*

take your time i dont mind waiting a little, im just impatient sometimes
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