Label Me Proud (A CS pet Journal)

[cswolf.]

Please write more this is so good.

[oldlizmar]

DATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.
Here are some things you could do better:
1. spell check. Lots of it.
2. STOP SAYIN WORK ON THE PLAY CONTINUES * twitch twitch*
3. That's all I have.
4. Sorry Chosen.
5. I thought it was awesome, but slowly loosing its quality.
6. More spell check.

GOODLY DONE

[G๏l๔єภєאє]

She did say that it was late, so she couldn't do spell-check. (sorry if I'm being sexist and your male, I sort of automatically say 'she'...) and I think that the whole 'Work on the play continues' will link in with something where something big happens and the play stops happening or something. I don't know though - not the author.

More please, Chosen!!!

[CalicoWolf]

I understand the work on play, because its part of a journal, but maybe give details of WHAT Proud is working on... maybe give it some varity[sp?].

[coelagirl]

No worries, I'm female, and excuse her, she's just doing her sisterly duties.
The 'work on the play continues' is sorta a time marker. Right now, I don't know when the play will be, so thier's no specific date. Later, when I DO know, it will say, like '3 days until the play."

Also Oldlizmar, stop insulting the quality without telling me how to improve. That was extremely rude of you, and I'm loosing Ideas to fill up now to the play.

[CalicoWolf]

No worries, I'm female, and excuse her, she's just doing her sisterly duties.
The 'work on the play continues' is sorta a time marker. Right now, I don't know when the play will be, so thier's no specific date. Later, when I DO know, it will say, like '3 days until the play."

Also Oldlizmar, stop insulting the quality without telling me how to improve. That was extremely rude of you, and I'm loosing Ideas to fill up now to the play.

Well maybe keep the "work on play continues" But maybe add something that was done, like So-andSo did part of a set, or a costume was made or lines were fumbled, just give us a little some to go on. Even if it leaves us hanging, it least lets us believe there really is something going on having to do with the play. Hope that made sense, I do enjoy your story tho, I like how its flowing and not jumping all over the place.

[coelagirl]

I understands, and shall see what I can do >:D

[G๏l๔єภєאє]

Cool, we've all agreed on some things. Now we can get down to writing more Proud *looks pointedly at Chosen*

Just joking. Take as long as you want!!!!

[CalicoWolf]

I understands, and shall see what I can do >:D

Also Perhaps an Idea since Proud doesnt want anything big to happen to the Words, perhaps that Fang and Marsh [being males] go behind her back and a small prank without Proud knowing or something pity that doesnt bother her too much [or maybe it can]. I'm just thinking when it comes to revenge Boys dont just sit around and wait.

[coelagirl]

I was thinking that exactly also, I should be typing while we speak.