Dear chosen,
I am going to take my time with this comment, seeing how everything I do you ask me not to.. Anyways the story is improving, no need to feel bad everyone surly understands you have school and homework and fun that gets in the way. I do understand the frustration of having to try and balance everything and not have time to do anything. I hope this isn't getting too long, oh well I'll end this soon... I wish you luck and such on the writing, I think if you do a "jerasic park" and have a period of calm, then problem then calm and then even worse problem you might be able to thing of more..
~your buddy,
Canadian























