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Revolution

Postby Aurealis » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:18 pm

This is a poem I wrote a little while ago. I hope you enjoy it!
Yours truly, Tiki11


Revolution

by Tiki11

Together we rise, together we fall
inspired by the stars, my friend and I
realize our true divine

So we change our hearts
to uncover our minds,
and we rise up
from
down
below.

Once risen
change is made
from within the glade
and now our motives played
decisions weighed.

Leaving now,
because we believe,
in our revelation
to free the nation!

Green is our color
and now is the hour,
flag in hand
I strike up our band.

MARCH

Solid as we walk,
spectators look and gawk.
LAST

CHANGING

MOMENTS

Protesters and offenders,
invading the pretenders.

CAUGHT

Red and blue lights blaring,
fleeing and escaping.

OVERTURNED

Forced into silence, we are the whispering warriors.
My friend and I, taken and thrown into a
dark
gloomy
dirty
barred room.

Fate determining,
destiny writing.
Locked away for

trying
believing,
attempting in
creating a

self-aware world for the rights of our people.
Please feel free to call me Aure or Aurora.
Thank you Neelix and SplashofOrangeJuice for the lovely art of my JBD Summer and Pocketmouse for this art here!
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Re: Revolution

Postby AwesomeFawkes » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:25 pm

Wow! That was such an awesome poem! I could feel the emotion in it, just as if I were actually there! Amazing job, keep up the great work!
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