Forestclan ( A Warrior cat story)

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Forestclan ( A Warrior cat story)

Postby sirène » Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:45 am

Long ago, once there was Forestclan, ctas that were in the forest(duh) but Foreststar, who started the clan, who was taken away by unknown cats, fear rose with the clan, the deputy became the leader, Sandpelt became Sandstar, for a couple of days, a few cats have been stolen, a Warrior, a queen and one kit,
but the kit was found a week and a half later, the kit named Nightkit a black and white tom that was quite smaller then the other kits. told the story. this is how it went.

Told through Nightkit's P.O.V(point of view)

I was resting with my mom, when all the sudden, there was some wierd cats. one was a Black tom, the other was a brown tabby! i gasped, they must have been the ones who took Foreststar!! i tried to squirm out of there grip, but the tabby had a grip on my scruff very well. they dragged me away and put me in this den, the black one was blocking the den, there i saw Foreststar. she was on thefloor shivering and looked very sick, i went over to her. "Foreststar!! are you okay?" i mumbled slightly tearing up. "be strong Nightkit, for one day you shall become Night-...." Foreststar said, then as i watched. my leader . die .... she did only have 1 life left. but what did she mea? Night-what?!?!then i fell asleep, beside my leader.


Now Forest clan is not very old, Nightkit is now Nightstar.



(not finished comment if you like please!!!!!)
Last edited by sirène on Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:47 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Forestclan ( A Warrior cat story)

Postby 4kcuo » Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:46 am

Nice story so far, but it has too many commas and not enough periods.
with school in full swing i'm likely going to be mobile-only except on weekends, sorry guys!!

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