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Every Part (song i wrote)

Postby SunnySkiesGirl » Thu Feb 23, 2012 6:04 am

Every part of us, the same
every part of us to blame
for the mess that we've made today

every part of me is weak
every part of me to seek out you in the crowd
today

so baby tell me, what went wrong here?
im crying, got to move on, here
and i need you to know now..

that every part of me is still in love with you
every part of me hopes that you feel the same way about me
darling
every part of me is dying cause your not looking inside me
on the outside, cant move on, cant get past that....

every part of us cant move
every part just needs to prove
to somebody
that we're love somewhere

every part of me is dying
every part of me is sad
baby

so baby tell me, what flew out here?
im dying, got to get on here
and i need you to know now...

that every part of me is still in love with you
every part of me hopes that you feel the same way about me
darling
every part of me is dying cause your not looking inside me
on the outside, cant move on, cant get past that....

so just keep breathing,
not that you can,
without me here
but you say your fine and i believe you
i believed you... but now..

that every part of me is still in love with you
every part of me hopes that you feel the same way about me
darling
every part of me is dying cause your not looking inside me
on the outside, cant move on, cant get past that....

oh, woah, oh, baby tell me,
what went wrong here?
im crying, got to move on, here
i missed and you need you to know..
baby tell me, what flew out here?
im dying, got to get on here
and i need you to know now...

that every part of me is still in love with you
every part of me hopes that you feel the same way about me
darling
every part of me is dying cause your not looking inside me
on the outside, cant move on, cant get past that....

:) how do you like it? i wrote this last week.
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Re: Every Part (song i wrote)

Postby skylar1998 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:06 am

I think it's pretty good :)
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Re: Every Part (song i wrote)

Postby SunnySkiesGirl » Fri Feb 24, 2012 1:30 pm

skylar1998 wrote:I think it's pretty good :)


;) Thanks.
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