*Old Poem By Me*

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*Old Poem By Me*

Postby skylar1998 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 3:38 am

I did this poem like awhile ago. I was really sad for some reason and was a little over dramatic in this poem, but I really like it. It has the hidden sorrow and sadness people may be hiding inside.

THIS POEM IS WRITTEN BY ME!!! NO TAKING MY WORK, TURNING IT INTO SOMETHING A LITTLE DIFFERENT AND SAY IT'S YOURS, AND NOOOOO BAD COMMENTS!!! IF YOU DONT HAVE ANYTHING GOOD TO SAY ABOUT IT SAY NOTHING AT ALL PLEASE :)


Inside:
Don't call me stupid because I know I am, holding these feelings, Inside.
Don't yell and scream, it already echos through my mind, Inside.
Don't worry about leaving me, it won't hurt any longer, only, Inside.
Don't worry about taking my life away cause someone already has, no longer does it hurt,
Inside.
Don't ignore me, it hurts me so bad, Inside.
Don't come in my room at night cause I will be crying and hurting, Inside.
Don't say or do any of this because it will only hurts me, Inside.

Hope you all like it (:
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Re: *Old Poem By Me*

Postby Yomi Aino » Thu Feb 23, 2012 5:12 am

I think it is a really beautiful poem. You should write some more!I'd be happy to read it. I also like how it's short and how it repeates the word 'inside'.
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Re: *Old Poem By Me*

Postby skylar1998 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 7:53 am

Thank you soooo much (: That really means a lot to me
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Re: *Old Poem By Me*

Postby melogo10 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:03 am

This poem is soo good!!! You should right more!
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Re: *Old Poem By Me*

Postby skylar1998 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:55 am

Thank you :) I hope to write more poems now
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Re: *Old Poem By Me*

Postby skylar1998 » Thu Feb 23, 2012 2:36 pm

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Re: *Old Poem By Me*

Postby skylar1998 » Fri Feb 24, 2012 8:28 am

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