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Story TEST

Postby rrobin » Wed Feb 22, 2012 11:04 am

I'm writing a test story, to see what you guys think of it. It will include cute little characters such as suttsies, Snobies, and possibly an apple. o.o I like to use all of my cute original pixels to make stories/other stuff. Anyway... enough of my opening spam... o3o

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1. Don't insult my writing. It's okay if you don't like it, but could you please keep it to yourself. I might sound rude but would you like it if I said something mean about your writing?
2. No mini modding.
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4. Cheeze. ;3 & have fun reading!
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Re: Story TEST

Postby rrobin » Wed Feb 22, 2012 11:40 am

~Chapter One~
Once Opon A Time...


The setting sun above the four bffs was an astounding sight. Days before, if you wouldve asked them about eachother, they'd probably say that they have never heard of them. But now, they were best friends. It all started when they met up in a flower patch. Now they were watching the sun set together.


Snowflake next to Ginger, Ginger nest to Sea, Minty next to Sea. Minty waited for something to happen. Nothing did. The moonlight squeezed it's way through the sunset and the sun went completely down. There was nothing but darkness. "Ginger..." Whispered snowflake, blushing, as Ginger came a bit closer to her. "Huh? Oh, um s- sorry..." Ginger said, blushing and moving away. Now snowflake's face was red too. "It's okay", she said, forcing a smile on to her face and looking away. "He doesn't understand me... does he?" She said to her self in a quiet manner, "What am I to do..." All of a sudden something touched her. "Oh!" Snowflake yelped, jumping up. "It's only me, snowy, we have to get home!" Snowflake's friend Minty calmly said, walking slowly with Snowflake.


"Mom, me and Minty are going outside! Be back soon!" Snowflake called to her mom, jumping out the door with Minty. She raced past the first few houses, and came to Sea's house, dragging him along. Minty smiled, and walked next to Sea. The next house was Ginger's. "I- i- how- can I do this..." She thought. She could barely move, as she thought, " I can't like him. I... I mean, um... i'm going to have to though." Snowfake walked up to his house, and he came along, walking by Minty's side. Snowfalke intended to walk with Minty, but she blushed and walked nest to Sea; Ginger looked sursprised.

Soon they were all sitting together, laughing, and falling all over eachother. Even snowflake. All of a sudden Snowy froze. "What am I doing? I should be over there with Ginger." She whispered. "Huh?" Sea asked Snowflake, "Oh, uh... n- nothing." She told him. "Okay."

"How can I tell him...?" She thought, and then without thinking, she got up, and sat next to Ginger. He looked over at her, quickly turning his head back to hide his blush. "Hey Snowflake..." She jumped. He was talking to her. She couldn't say anything, but then she managed to spit out the word, "What?" "How do you know... if somebody... uh... l- likes y- you...?" He said stuttering and blushing. "I... don't know." She admitted, showing him her blush. "I'm trying to figure that out, too."
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