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Free. Finally free.

Postby Shezza. » Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:52 pm

This story is about a dog named Zero, she is a Hyena x Collie mix. She is a light dusty brown color. She has the long collie tail and muzzle, and her ears are rounded like the Hyenas. She has a dark brown(almost black) spot, running from the top half of her neck to her tail(her tail is also dark brown) Her muzzle and throat is white. She has light blue eyes.
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Zero looked around, cramped in her tiny rusty cage. The arena was deathly quiet, and not a dog made a sound. She was at the dog fighting arena, but every one has scattered. They where told the cops had been called and where on there way. Zero hoped with all her heart that this was true. Shock, her little silver Chihuahua friend was in the cage next to her. Zero looked over at Shock and opened her mouth to say something when she was cut of by the shrill wailing of police cars. A smile crossed her face. "Free. Finally free," She whispered. Quick enough, dozens of police officers filled the little building that was crowed with dog cages.
"Zero! We are finally free!" Shock said excitedly. One of the police officers came over to her cage, and carefully unhooked the latch. He opened the door
"Come on out girl," He said, a huge smile on his face. Zero was shaking, and very nervous, she didn't know these people, and the only time she ever got out of this cage is when she was picked to fight. The officer reached in, grabbed her scruff and started to pull her out. Reluctantly, Zero stepped out. The concrete was cold under her paws.
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Re: Free. Finally free.

Postby Shezza. » Fri Feb 24, 2012 1:11 pm

Chills ran from her nose to the tip of her tail. The police officer leaned over and hooked the leash that he had onto the cheap, old and broken collar around her neck. He looked at her licence. "Zero, huh?" He asked.

(Sorry...this one is short...hope you like it so far))
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