Lena's Death - A romantic poem

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Lena's Death - A romantic poem

Postby mortal instruments » Tue Feb 21, 2012 1:51 pm

Those of you who have read the Beautiful Creatures books will get this more than those who have not, but i'm pretty sure it would still make sense. Please comment on if you liked it or not, and please be honest.

She is dead.
I throw back my head
Close my eyes
And wail like a wolf.
I don't believe it.
How can something so beautiful,
So full of light,
Of goodness,
Die?
I hardly notice
The tears streaming down my cheeks.
I am alone.

They try to take her from me
She won't be taken away from me again.
I won't let them.
She will stay in my arms
Forever.
We will stay together.

"Ethan,"
A voice breaks through the mist.
I look up.
Above me is Amma.
She's crying.
I can't speak.

"Ethan,"
It echoes through my head.
"Ethan,"
"Ethan,"
I close my eyes.
Lena is gone.
I am not Ethan.
Not without Lena.

"Lena,"
I whisper.
A hand on my shoulder.
I shrug it off.
I don't want comfort.
I want Lena.
But there is no Lena.
Not anymore.
I cannot follow her this time.
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Postby mortal instruments » Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:47 pm

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Re: Lena's Death - A romantic poem

Postby mortal instruments » Fri Feb 24, 2012 2:56 pm

bump. BTW, please comment!!
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Postby mortal instruments » Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:45 am

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