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Aerabithia |:| Dream Realm |:| 1st Chapter Up!

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 6:59 am

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I am telling the prolouge of
this book as Destiny, the current
queen of Aerabithia.
Welcome to Aerabithia,
the realm of dreams,
home to your imagination,
and world of the Arabithians.

The Chapters:
I am working
on the links,
you shall have
to wait until
the Arabithians
have helped me
set up...

The Books:
You are
currently reading
book one. Book two
shall be released
shortly...

The character
list is below, the
Arabithians urge
you to read it, at
least that way you
will know who they

are.
You're not alone
Together we stand
I'll be by your side, you know I'll take your hand
When it gets cold
And it feels like the end
There's no place to go
You know I won't give in
No I won't give in

Keep holding on
'Cause you know we'll make it through, we'll make it through
Just stay strong
'Cause you know I'm here for you, I'm here for you

There's nothing you could say
Nothing you could do
There's no other way when it comes to the truth
So keep holding on
'Cause you know we'll make it through, we'll make it through

Avril Lavigne Keep Holding On


Please post
comments and crtitique,
all are welcome as long
as they are not rude.
Hope you like it!
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Re: |:| Aerabithia |:| The Realm Of Dreams |:| WIP No Postin

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:00 am

Main Characters:
WIP




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Full Name:
Destiny Melody Saphire

Age:
18 Aerabithian Years (27 Earth Years)
Immortall

Role(s):
Queen Of Aerabithia
Keeper Of The Unicorns

Power(s):
Telepathy And Mind Connection To Earth


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(Found Here)

Full Name:
Lunamisty (Luna-misty)

Age:
11 Aerabithian Years (20 Earth Years)

Role(s):
Leader Of The Animals Of Illuminox

Power(s):
Glow
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Re: |:| Aerabithia |:| The Realm Of Dreams |:| WIP No Postin

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:00 am

Welcome to the wonderful world of Aerabithia...
I have nothing more to add, yet
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Re: |:| Aerabithia |:| The Realm Of Dreams |:| WIP No Postin

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:01 am

1st Chapter |:| The Aerabithian Queen

The bright stars glowed up in the sky of Aerabithia, shining down on it's inhabitants, ready to choose the new queen. They twinkled as Aerabithians gathered in the cirlce of light, by the pool of the Three White Moons. As the people of Aerabithia began to talk anxiously, a light sparkled down on Destiny Melody Saphire, and everyone stopped to stare as the illuminous light shone apon her. She looked around confused at the peoples actions - not knowing they were acctually here people. A few seconds went by before the Unicorn herd of light pranced past, and the lead stallion greeted Destiny. She gazed at it in amazment, then it bowed it's horn in respect to it's new queen. Destiny smiled as speechless as she was, and looked at them. Her eyes slowly closed as she took a deep breath, gazing up to the stars. "Aerabithians, listen now. Your queen has been chosen, and that queen, is I" She said. Once the words had fallen from her blood red lips, the crowd of Aerabithians cheered in unison, chanting as they did. It was such a beautiful sight that night, to see the light of the chosen fall and pick out one so young to be queen.

Destiny sat on a thrown inside the palace of Aerabithia, watching the golden sun rise from out her window. She gazed at it for a while, as she sat there on the thrown, which had been crafted from Aerabithia's finest crystal (Quartaz). She smiled at her people as they passed. It was such a mystical world up in Aerabithia. She looked up to the sky and smiled, sending a telepathic message to her friend Quilby, the golden horned Jackalope. As she waited, she began to hum an old Aerabithian melody, constructed by the first ever Aerabithian queen, Jasmine Quartaz Crystal. It was like all were listening - because at that moment the palace fell silent - and began to enjoy the soft tune produced by the queen.
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Re: |:| Aerabithia |:| The Realm Of Dreams |:| WIP No Postin

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:01 am

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Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:01 am

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Re: |:| Aerabithia |:| The Realm Of Dreams |:| WIP No Postin

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:02 am

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Re: Aerabithia |:| Dream Realm |:| WIP feel free to though

Postby satuurnity » Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:32 am

Ok, I am starting to write even though the characters aren't done yet. I shall add them to the character post when they are introduced.
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Re: Aerabithia |:| Dream Realm |:| 1st Chapter Up!

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