by [Braveheart] » Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:07 am
"Stop that right now!" snarled a voice. Rainpaw ducked under a bush as thier leader, Coyotestar stalked up to the battered apprentices. Lionpaw had a scatch on his shoulder, Ashpaw's eye was swollen, and Icepaw was limping. Lightningpaw had blood pouring out of a wound on her flank. Coyotestar gave a yowl in rage, and dug his claws into the ground. "I will hurt YOU if you EVER attack each other again! You fox-headed idiots! he hissed, and lashed out at the bush where Rainpaw was hiding. She flinched and drove father back into the bush. Coyotestar leaped at Lionpaw, but was interceapted by Ratscar, who stood on his hindpaws and slashed out to protect his kits. Gingerfoot, the mother of Rainpaw and Lightningpaw stood next to him. Coyotestar snarled"get out of the way!" he rasped "let me at 'em!" he staggered. As much as Rainpaw feared him, he was getting old. She glanced back at her pelt and stifiled a gasp. It was TORN with scraches, each fatally deep. She backed out of the bushes and fled out of camp. She raced along the streams and the riverbends and went all the way around the lake. She crossed the border without a second thought into Breezeclan and rounded up the cliffs. She stood on the top,looking down. She could hear the yowls in Thunderclan all the way up here. She squinted as she thought she saw huge dogs charging at full speed towards the thunderclan camp. She strained to count. She ended up counting 15 strong heads of dogs, with like five more hidden in the shadows. Thier shapes gave away the fact that they were huge! not able to go on, she staggered and rolled down the cliff and landed splash into the moonpool.
chapter two
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